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Cassidy Van Bavel

Canada

Seventeen years old, in first year university, aspiring classical singer. I've been writing since I could hold a pencil and I sure hope I've improved since then.

Message from Writer

I'm a seasoned fanfiction writer and I'm trying to broaden my horizons a little bit. I love reviewing almost as much as I love writing, so don't be surprised if I pop up in your notifications. I'm a complete grammar nerd and will not hesitate to call out comma splices and subject-verb agreement issues whenever I see them. I love getting reviews, too, so feel free to be as harsh as possible.

Have a great day!
-Cassidy

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Cassidy Van Bavel (Canada) reviewed:

Thy Sister of the Devil, Taken Silently but Violently

PROMPT: Mystery Writing Competition 2017

You should definitely work on your punctuation, grammar, and pronoun use. I feel like I cracked down on you pretty hard, but it's important to get the mechanics down so people can really appreciate your story and your style! Also,...

about 2 years ago

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Cassidy Van Bavel (Canada) published:

Ignatius Kobayashi and the Desperate Fool

PROMPT: Mystery Writing Competition 2017

"If that's true, then it couldn't've been the wife." Kobayashi’s frown deepened as he scratched 'wife' off the list of suspects.

"Why not?" complained Bernard Levitt. "You said she told you she wasn't happy with the marriage. And she had a motive, too. The money!" As he spoke, he jabbed a fat finger at the young investigator’s mahogany desk.

"Not that much money, since her husband was accumulating quite a hefty amount of debt. She also has a bulletproof alibi."
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Cassidy Van Bavel (Canada) reviewed:

Secrets Get Buried

PROMPT: Mystery Writing Competition 2017

Is this... really a mystery, though?

about 2 years ago

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