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Museum: Chapter One

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A better description of the setting would really help to clarify some of the missing elements and help to expand your story more. Think of providing a description of the characters and the museum. Add some more descriptive words. How...

almost 3 years ago

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Mycatcali (United States) published:

Love, Sandra

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almost 3 years ago

Mycatcali (United States) published:

Crossing Borders

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Katya Murphy, a handmaiden to the Duchess of Waldark, has been summoned to stand in front of the king. Her employer was imprisoned a fortnight ago, before the kings of Tuwall and Cagervole signed the peace treaty. A condition of the new treaty states that the Duchess will be freed by Cagervole when her daughter is returned to the country. 

"Katya, handmaiden to the traitor, do you know why you are here?" The steward to the king asked her, peering...

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about 4 years ago

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Mycatcali (United States) published:

Sightseeing

PROMPT: Flash Fiction Competition 2016

"How far down do you think it is?" Donnie asked as we stared down into the canyon.
"At least a hundred feet," I responded as I edged away from the cliff face. "Come on, Donnie, back up a bit." 
My little brother leaned toward the edge slightly more, laughing at the panic on my face. He wasn't scared like me.
"Donnie!" I jumped toward him just as what had previously seemed to be rocks moved beneath his feet.
It was...

over 4 years ago