Swasti (United States) reviewed:
PROMPT: Inventory
I really like the simplicity with which you describe and list out the objects. Each one is different from the other and you offer great reasoning for each 'inventory.' Maybe you can look more into the prompt examples and see...
5 months ago
Swasti (United States) reviewed:
FREE WRITING
This piece is so different and beautiful, especially in its poetic form. I love that you tried this out, and you should continue to do so! The ending is written perfection and deeply haunting, so it would be great to...
6 months ago
Swasti (United States) reviewed:
FREE WRITING
I love this piece so much since it feels like you brought a part of Varanasi into your writing. Only someone who actually went there would describe it this well! Keep using specific descriptions to ground the reader more into...
6 months ago
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Swasti (United States) reviewed:
PROMPT: This I Believe
Your writing is truly amazing, and I am so happy that you decided to publish it despite its length. I love your use of metaphors and simple language to show the things that you truly believe in and hope for....
7 months ago
Swasti (United States) published:
PROMPT: Flash Fiction Competition 2019
Madness painted itself from an expression of welcoming friendships, of indecision in prolonged battles- of beauty in blooming carnations. Refusing to stay chained to the idleness of tradition, bewildering itself from universal confusion- my troubled mind began to wander in its neural labyrinth.
I see people, ordinary people racing across a vermillion trail, against time.
I see my friend, madness, slowly drowning in a tainted pool: of cardinal blood.
Unable to rescue him, I tightly grasp my already wrinkled sheets.
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over 1 year ago