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Wishes from the Little Men

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When you see the little man, oh when you see his face.

You’ll go to catch him, and over the hills you’ll race 

And if you catch the little brute tell him this

“You give me three wishes and I’ll let ya go”

But if he’s a wise one, he’ll say “no”

If you want those wishes just threaten him with a knife or sooth him with your fife 

He’ll have to shout “alright” in fright or pure delight

Now don’t...

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Devan published:

Wishes from the Little Men

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                             When you see the little man, oh when you see his face
                              You’ll go to catch him, and over the hills you’ll race 
                                    And if you catch the little brute tell him this...

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Devan published:

Wishes from the Little Men

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When you see the little man, oh when you see his face
You’ll go to catch him, and over the hills you’ll race 
And if you catch the little brute tell him this
“You give me three wishes and I’ll let ya go”
But if he’s a wise one, he’ll say “no”
If you want those wishes just threaten him with a knife or sooth him with your fife 
He’ll have to shout “alright” in fright or pure delight
Now don’t...

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almost 4 years ago

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Devan published:

One

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                                                                             One the number on none

                                                                                 None but one

                                                                                So far from help

                                                                                And with no friends

                                                                                Until the world ends

                                                                                   Until rapture

                                                                               Of this we can be sure

                                                                                Until it finds a friend

                                                                               And learns to dance again

                                                                                 Dance like a dove

                                                                                 In its forgotten feeling

                                                                                   The feeling of love

 

                                                                                

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Fevers of Inspiration

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I like some of the vocab used (looking at wordsmith), and I enjoy the twist straight from standard paragraph to poem. Your knowledge of poetry is well illustrated. However, I enjoy lots of the description in the standard paragraph, but...

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Devan published:

Wild Ride

PROMPT: WILD

A wild side

That some try to hide

It takes you on a ride

Without a guide

It's just you

Without a clue

To see you through

But there is another

You not alone there are others

Mothers, friends, fathers, sisters, brothers

They will help you find the way

They'll mold you from the clay

You will not go astray

You will make it through the strife

From this world you will recieve not knife

You are strong and can...

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almost 4 years ago

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Cruel but Not

PROMPT: Countdown

                                       It is beatiful, ugly, magnificent, dull, cruel, compassionate, happy, sad.

                                                       It's inite it's fleeting, the good turns into bad.

                             ...

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