Ariel_

United States

All I want in life is to mold words beautifully, to have something worth contributing, to make the spaces between the soul and the heart resound warmly.

Message from Writer

Don't be afraid to write something that isn't good because playing around with it is the only way to get better. Also, criticism is a wonderful thing; it's when you get to crack your knuckles and become closer to being proficient.

Peer Reviews

Magmatized

FREE WRITING

Falling in love and then parting-- it seems you had forgotten to pick up your heart before she walked away with it. I can relate.

about 2 years

The Story of Narcissus

FREE WRITING

Overall it was good; I think if you developed more story and more meat on him by taking time show him through his actions instead of telling what he did, it would be amazing. :) I liked reading it!

over 2 years

Dance of Nature

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unknown