Verity Fynn

United States of America

Hey, hey, hey! I'm a sixteen-year-old girl with a passion for reading and writing. Aside from that, I enjoy correcting people, chocolate, and traveling.
Shalom!
Verity

Message from Writer

"Stars cannot shine without the darkness..."
~Anonymous

Peer Reviews

My Hope

PROMPT: A piece of good news.

This is a great piece of writing! It was a real pleasure to read.

about 5 years

Captured Voices

PROMPT: Fantasy Writing Competition 2015

This is the best short story I've read in a while. That said, there were a lot of places where I wanted to know more or felt that things should be expanded upon, like when the child Ella was carrying just disappeared from the story, or when Ella "crossed over" into the USA. All in all, you've got a great story here!

about 5 years

The 99

PROMPT: Personal Narrative Competition 2015

Great job! Keep writing!

about 5 years

Home

PROMPT: Invisible Cities

Great job! You seem to switch verb tenses sometimes, though, so be on the lookout for that in the future.

about 5 years

About Me

PROMPT: YOU in threes

Nice job! Keep writing :)

about 5 years

What Really Happens When Posting My Work

FREE WRITING

Same, girl! This was nicely written, and really spoke to me. Keep writing :)

about 5 years

Elaria

PROMPT: Invisible Cities

Nice work :) Keeeeeeep writing!

about 5 years

Ossibus: The city made of bones

PROMPT: Invisible Cities

Great job :) Keep writing.

about 5 years

I Hid The Key Inside The Green Gummy Bear

FREE WRITING

Wow! I loved reading this piece. I could really identify with it, and I liked the image of the green gummy bear. Great work! Keep writing; you've got major talent!

about 5 years

Just a speck of dust

PROMPT: Personal Narrative Competition 2015

Try to put a bit of direction into your stories; have them take the reader on a journey.

about 5 years

Arduaesthity

PROMPT: Fernweh

I like your word, but I have trouble pronouncing it. Maybe you could include a pronunciation key?

over 5 years