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Annabella Twomey

United States

lover of reading, writing, exploring, and creativity

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I love any type of constructive feedback that will help my writing! Please feel free to be as critical as you want if you feel like you know something that will greatly improve the piece you are reviewing.

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Annabella Twomey (United States) published:

Stanford Rape Case Article

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    You’ve likely heard about the Stanford rape victim. There is debate and controversy flying around, especially following the verdict in the case. The defendant, 20 year-old Brock Allen Turner, faced a maximum of 14 years in state prison. Instead, he got six months and probation, the judge citing that a longer sentence would have “severe impact” on Turner.
    On January 18th, 2015, two men on bicycles stopped and restrained a man (Turner) who was raping an unconscious woman behind a...

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about 2 years ago

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Annabella Twomey (United States) published:

Mimic of "Directive" by Robert Frost

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Remember this town vividly,
For when you return, few things will remain the same

Start, slowly, on a road through suburbia-
A path riddled with fine china and silverware, but littered with the corruption of materialism

You will pass dogs, dozens of them, so stop to pet them.
Their eagerness may make its way to you

It won’t be long before a chance comes along,
Beckoning you to the mountains of Vershire

Follow this path and explore
The sugar maples...

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over 2 years ago

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Annabella Twomey (United States) published:

Growing Up

PROMPT: Six-Word Memoir


The lines blurred between “right choices."

over 2 years ago

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Annabella Twomey (United States) published:

Growing Up

PROMPT: Six-Word Memoir


The lines blurred between “right choices."

over 2 years ago

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Annabella Twomey (United States) reviewed:

People

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Great job with this piece! I love your little descriptions and the basis of the poem. This is just a thought, but since sometimes you describe actions that most humans find normal as differences or oddities, you could find a...

almost 3 years ago

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almost 3 years ago

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Annabella Twomey (United States) reviewed:

A Game of Chess

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Awesome job! I love how you took the game of chess and personified it. It is a great way to visualize this game. See comments for small revision ideas :)

almost 3 years ago

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Annabella Twomey (United States) reviewed:

My Hope

PROMPT: A piece of good news.

Great job with this piece! Your epiphanies that you had are spot-on and it's great that you have come to peace with yourself and who you are! One thing I would add would be what sparked this "healing journey." Was...

almost 3 years ago

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Annabella Twomey (United States) reviewed:

Writing Her

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Awesome job with this piece! I love the way you switch between describing the ocean and "Her." If possible, I would go into a little more detail about her, more descriptions, and her actions/personality traits, just to give more visual...

almost 3 years ago