Written_In_Water

United Kingdom

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Christadelphian
INFJ
Hufflepuff
A better reader than a writer - but aren't we all?
Joined July 8th 2021

Message from Writer

"The more solitary, the more friendless, the more unsustained I am, the more I will respect myself. I will keep the law given by God...there I plant my foot" - Jane Eyre

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Written_In_Water (United Kingdom) published:

Lasts

FREE WRITING

people can recognise their firsts
but not their lasts
that's what makes them harder

the last time you go here or there
the last time you'll feel snow fall
the last time you see someone
the last words you say to them
the last tear you'll shed 
the last smile you'll crack

slide by without so much as a whisper
nothing to signal the end of an era
no sound of the last page being folded over
done.

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Written_In_Water (United Kingdom) published:

The crafted skies and the coarse earth

FREE WRITING

The sky is too well crafted for me
Too rich and grand
With it's silver linings and gold sunsets
It glances down 
Too lofty and laughably high
And lords itself over my sighs

The earth is too coarse for me 
It's thick skin clings to the back of my hand
Too rocky and unidealized
Too much scrabbling under my nails
Too impure, full of crawling bugs
Too harsh to be compared with soft velvet rugs

The trees are too old...

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