Luka I Erei

Singapore

Hi, I'm Luka!

Avid reader, writer,
Just an all round big fan of words

All feedback is welcome!

Peer Reviews

Stasis: The Girl I've Been is Dead

PROMPT: Science Fiction Competition 2021

I think you should try to revise the second part of the story, and show not tell a bit more.

3 months

the last person on earth

PROMPT: Science Fiction Competition 2021

I like your use of the swings in forming a very tense tone. Also, if you have the time, it would be great if you could help me review my piece, https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/237386/version/505183. Thanks!

3 months

One more time

FREE WRITING

I think this piece is so meaningful, and really addresses a very important issue in society.

3 months

Paradise

FREE WRITING

unknown

Poetic Creature

FREE WRITING

You should try writing like this more! I think this style has the potential to bring out a whole host of emotions and feelings that would be much harder to evoke with just a simple narrative style.

3 months

Monsters with beautiful heart & ugly skin

FREE WRITING

I think the overall idea of this piece is really beautiful and meaningful.

3 months

The Candle Holder

FREE WRITING

I think the last paragraph can be reworked for more impact. I'm not sure if increased emotional investment from my previous point would do this. Not to say that the paragraph is not impactful, but I feel like there is room for improvement there.

4 months