Ash (United States) published:
PROMPT: That Sort of Person
She's the girl who'd wear heels so that her accidental mashing of your foot would feel like a dagger piercing your skin.
You know the girl I'm talking about - the kind that would make a nice spunky protagonist if she was hiding a fragile heart instead of a harsher layer of wit and mistrust.
He's the boy that would lie to you even if you called him out.
over 4 years ago
Ash (United States) reviewed:
PROMPT: Open Prompt
I really liked this piece. There weren't that many errors, but you need to pay attention to what exactly you're trying to convey to your readers. Your descriptions are beautiful, but be aware that lengthy descriptions can sometimes end up...
almost 5 years ago