Vici B

Canada

Welcome to my profile, I'm a North-American teen with an ego the size of Lake Michigan. I typically write/ study poetry but I came here to learn about stories and to enter contests. Comment on any work that's published feel free to poke around.

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Spunk, need I say more? I am an over-exaggerated cross between a wanna-be Mowat and rebel Frost. (well at least I try to be)

Vici B (Canada) published:

Y2K-X

PROMPT: Science Fiction Competition 2021

One foot in front of the other, that’s all you had to do. That’s all anyone had to do. No matter how bloodied the balls of your feet became, or how heavily your legs dragged themselves across the ruins of your home, no one ever stopped moving. At least, no one in Maria’s rank that is. Who knows what their superiors were up to anyways? Studying a schedule of drinking, sleeping, and ruling the world wouldn’t help her make it up Garson’s Hill anyhow. “Bloody bastards” hissed Fern into Maria’s ear as...

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Vici B (Canada) published:

Lucid Dreamer

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Who is staring at my bedframe?
Who is standing in the doorway?
 
A beast as tall as the ten foot wide wild grown golden-brown and sliver laden tree.
A beast as black as the moonless night which casts his shadows up and down all over me.
A face, as rotten as it’s yellow lengthy teeth which grind and chatter gleefully.
The body, of my nightmares sister dearest what makes it so hard for you to just believe and see? ...

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Vici B (Canada) published:

Winston

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THE FOLLOWING IS A WORK IN PROGRESS- please comment on anything from grammar to sentence structure. just know that this is FAR from finished. This is the second draft of chapter 1

Since the age of three, Winston had been known to display some rather obscure tendencies. Besides the tamer flaws such as eating dirt or making friends out of dead fish, Winston’s troubles stemmed from a relentless dehumanizing fear of his fellow man. Going through great lengths as to avoid even the smallest of social events. He threw tantrums if his mother so much as mentioned forcing him to school; hid...

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Vici B (Canada) published:

Winston

FREE WRITING

THE FOLLOWING IS A WORK IN PROGRESS- please comment on anything from grammar to sentence structure. just know that this is FAR from finished.

Since the age of three, Winston had been known to display some rather obscure tendencies. Besides the tamer flaws such as eating dirt or making friends out of dead fish, Winston had taken it upon himself to become the loneliest boy in the world. Taking great lengths to avoid even the smallest of social occasions. He threw tantrums if his mother so much as mentioned forcing him to school. He hid in cupboards...

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Vici B (Canada) published:

Peeking Duck: A Time in Toronto

PROMPT: Food Writing Competition 2021

5:03 AM, August 14th, 2015. I spent the bulk of that morning tied between checking my digital-watch and making trips to and from the washroom. 5:03 I thought. I had exactly two minutes to extinguish the fires in my stomach and drag myself out the door. Sunlight stung my eyes as I staggered my way to the van. Noticing my sisters piercing stare, I straightened my spine and lifted my luggage into the trunk. 5:06 We were officially late.  
Through the trails of intense gastric pains which plagued me that day, I still manage to recall the charming aroma of early-morning Canada. It carried a softer- more floral scent, in...

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