Maritza

Jamaica

Currently collecting all the serotonin from Pride and Prejudice

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Maritza (Jamaica) published:

A Night Out (revised)

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    In the heart of Brooklyn, New York, the pulsating and vibrant hues of the cities, softened to a subtle dim in Jae’s bedroom. He was deep in thought about what his friends had told him earlier at school that day. “Come to the party tonight! It is the last day of exams!” they had shouted. Jae was quite reluctant at first and needed almost an hour of deep contemplation to finally succumb to the chants in his head. ...

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Maritza (Jamaica) published:

A Night Out (revised)

FREE WRITING

    In the heart of Brooklyn, New York, the pulsating and vibrant hues of the cities, softened to a subtle dim in Jae’s bedroom. He was deep in thought about what his friends had told him earlier at school that day. “Come to the party tonight! It is the last day of exams!” they had shouted. Jae was quite reluctant at first and needed almost an hour of deep contemplation to finally succumb to the chants in his head. ...

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21 days ago

Maritza (Jamaica) started following ScarlettLucian (Canada)

about 2 months ago

Maritza (Jamaica) published:

Love That Never Fills A Void

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What is love supposed to feel like?
Love should be poetic. Endearing. Captivating. The thought of two souls longing for each other ever so achingly but always seem to be just out of reach. Love should make one feel frozen in the state of time; always hoping for the moment to remain.
A photograph. To capture the times, one wants to relive forever. Relax. Listen to the rhythmic beat of your lover’s heart. A silent room with only the soft...

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about 2 months ago

Maritza (Jamaica) started following Minvra (United States)

about 2 months ago

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Maritza (Jamaica) published:

Reminiscence of Daises and Vanilla Ice- Cream

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1983. Running downhill as the wind blew through our hair. The still lake below as the target. Happiness and joy suffocated the lungs of the young. The clipped green fields and the Italian countryside sky. Love and adventure were in the air.  Still running, you try to catch up to him as he looked back at you with a smile beaming on his face. He reached his hand towards you. It almost seemed as if time was frozen yet going...

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about 2 months ago

Maritza (Jamaica) published:

Behind Closed Doors

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    The days of crying alone, wheezing, and trying so hard to breathe; were long forgotten now that our eyes have met. Your eyes looked swollen and red. Your lips quivered and trembled as our stare intensified. A deep red blush flushed your face. It had been obvious that we both travelled through hell and back. Tears brimmed at my eyes, threatening to spill over. I kept our gaze locked though. In the almost empty living room. Sitting on the floor,...

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about 2 months ago

Maritza (Jamaica) published:

Behind Closed Doors

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    The days of crying alone, wheezing, and trying so hard to breathe; were long forgotten now that our eyes have met. Your eyes looked swollen and red. Your lips quivered and trembled as our stare intensified. A deep red blush flushed your face. It had been obvious that we both travelled through hell and back. Tears brimmed at my eyes, threatening to spill over. I kept our gaze locked though. In the almost empty living room. Sitting on the floor,...

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about 2 months ago

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Maritza (Jamaica) published:

My Dear Child

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From I was a little girl, I watched the world around me change,
Phones were our new best friends and it was quite the exchange,
We stopped playing outside and became fascinated with technology,
The advancement of such was as strange as mythology.
I grew up enjoying the finer things in life,
But little did I know, my own child would grow up in strife,
I thought nothing much of gadgets at my young age,
But you, my dear child,...

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about 2 months ago