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PROMPT: TV Pilot Competition 2017

FADE IN:

INT. A PSYCHIATRIST'S OFFICE - DAY

ERICKA (18) sits on the fluffy black couch. She wears a t-shirt and jeans; she looks perfectly normal. Her backpack sits on the couch beside her. The wall behind her is a window, revealing a courtyard garden. Erick stares at the few leafless trees and snowy paths. DR. MABLE (42) enters and sits opposite her on a similarly comfy chair. She holds a clipboard and pen. 

                                                                                        DR. MABLE
                                                                   So,...

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New Year's Night

PROMPT: Playwriting Competition 2016

NEW YEAR’S NIGHT
Act I, Scene I
(There is a ding as an elevator rises and opens. VANESSA, an extremely pretty, dreamy girl in her early 20s, runs into it and rapidly presses the buttons, a half-empty glass of champagne sloshing around in her hand. She wears a coquettish white dress with a wine stain splattered all over it. CARTER, also early 20s, a server, hurries after and slips into the elevator, carrying a half-empty tray of crab rangoon.)
CARTER: I wanted...

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Love and Titles

PROMPT: Playwriting Competition 2016

Your character relationships are pretty clear, and will become more apparent with actors, so you don't have to state so much in the dialogue. Let the audience see the way the characters are interacting without directly stating everything.

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a.ham24601 (United States) published:

New Year's Night

PROMPT: Playwriting Competition 2016

NEW YEAR’S NIGHT
Act I, Scene I
(There is a ding as an elevator rises and opens. VANESSA, an extremely pretty, dreamy girl in her early 20s, runs into it and rapidly presses the buttons. She wears a coquettish white dress with a wine stain splattered all over it. CARTER, also early 20s, a server, hurries after her and slips into the elevator.)
CARTER: I wanted to apologize to you for what happened.
VANESSA: What?
CARTER: What happened. With the wine and your dress. It...

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a.ham24601 (United States) published:

New Year's Night

PROMPT: Playwriting Competition 2016

NEW YEAR’S NIGHT
Act I, Scene I
(There is a ding as an elevator rises and opens. VANESSA, an extremely pretty, dreamy girl in her early 20s, runs into it and rapidly presses the buttons. She wears a coquettish white dress with a wine stain splattered all over it. CARTER, also early 20s, a server, hurries after her and slips into the elevator.)
CARTER: I wanted to apologize to you for what happened.
VANESSA: What?
CARTER: What happened. With the wine and your dress. It...

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