PROMPT: Flash Fiction Competition 2021
Take my comments with a grain of salt. But this has the look of a winning entry. Keep it up mate.
about 8 hours
Noice piece! Keep writing, i like your prompt based pieces a lot too..
about 1 month
cool piece! I can't wait to read more of your poetry.
PROMPT: Extraordinary in the Ordinary
this is a wonderful poem!! however, i couldn't resonate with the poet's envy. i likes how the laces are brought to life. much love :)
PROMPT: Mid-May Grab Bag
wonderfully written! I would however want you to read some other poems on similar topics or just sensitive topics in general. don't sugarcoat it, but also don't make it too literal. keep writing :)