The Elephant In The Room

Israel

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Go as hard as you can with the constructive criticism, its really fine :)

The Elephant In The Room (Israel) published:

Love Like A Poet

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Love like a poet.

No, not in a million years not for all the money in the world.

Please love me, for me.

Don't love my hair because it reminds you of the nights sky on a dark winter eve.

Love it because its pretty. Just the way hair should be.

And when were together. Done let your heart beat as if were on a sinking ship.

When your with me you can breath. The same air you breathed the...
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13 days ago

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The Elephant In The Room (Israel) published:

Love Like A Poet

FREE WRITING

Love like a poet.

No, not in a million years not for all the money in the world.

Please love me, for me.

Don't love my hair because it reminds you of the nights sky on a dark winter eve.

Love it because its pretty. Just the way hair should be.

And when were together. Done let your heart beat as if were on a sinking ship.

When your with me you can breath. The same air you breathed the...
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14 days ago

The Elephant In The Room (Israel) published:

Love Like A Poet

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Love like a poet.

No, not in a million years not for all the money in the world.

Please love me, for me.

Don't love my hair because it reminds you of the nights sky on a dark holiday eve.

Love it because its pretty. Like hair should be.

And when were together. Done let your heart beat as if were on a sinking ship.

When your with me you can breath. The same air you breathed the other day.
...
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14 days ago

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The Elephant In The Room (Israel) published:

The Rainbow Connection

PROMPT: April Grab Bag

You say I'm a vision. more of an Illusion.
I say, you're a frog. Are we even now?

The lovers and dreamers are a nice company.
Its new to enjoy staying up at night.
Existing with taste is something that's worth a fight.

But nice never built a bridge.
Nice sings you a song that makes you believe.
In a bridge, to a world, that you want be yours.

Someday. well build it. The rainbow connection.
The Thinkers, The doers....

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17 days ago

The Elephant In The Room (Israel) published:

The Rainbow Connection

PROMPT: April Grab Bag

You say I'm a vision. more of an Illusion.
I say, you're a frog. Lets call it  a tie?

The lovers and dreamers are a nice company.
Its new to enjoy staying up at night.
Existing with taste is something that's worth a fight.

But nice never built a bridge.
Nice sings you a song that makes you believe.
In a bridge, to a world, that you want be yours.

Someday. well build it. The rainbow connection.
The Thinkers, The...

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17 days ago

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The Elephant In The Room (Israel) published:

Three liners

PROMPT: Sijo


Goodbye
I wished you'll never return.
You're drenched from a different kind of sweat.
You know where the door is.


pool
I dived straight into the pool.
Headfirst. with the courage I recently bought.
And for for some reason the water were warm.

Love
I loved you the same way fish loved water.
But once I was out I was dancing.
Fish die the same in and out of the water.
 
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about 1 month ago

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The Elephant In The Room (Israel) published:

The Lion King

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The Lion King
My friend is terrified of the warthogs at the entry of heaven.
"How can you be? Its Pumbaa!"
She never saw it, was too scared




A Letter To Your Future Self.

​A letter to your future self.
HI,
Everything's gonna be fine right? I hope so...
Have a good day, your lame self from the past.




A Long Day.

A women opens the door to her house.
Eye bags weighing from her eyes.
"Mommy mommy great news!" ...
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about 2 months ago

The Elephant In The Room (Israel) published:

The Lion King

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A Letter To Your Future Self.

​A letter to your future self.
HI,
Everything's gonna be fine right? I hope so...
Have a good day, your lame self from the past.





The Lion King
My friend is terrified of the warthogs at the entry of heaven.
"How can you be? Its Pumbaa!"
She never saw it, was too scared





A Long Day.

A women opens the door to her house.
Eye bags weighing from her eyes.
"Mommy mommy great news!" ...
Seeking Peer Reviews

about 2 months ago

The Elephant In The Room (Israel) reviewed:

25 Word Stories

PROMPT: 25 Words

I will you need to go over the grammar on your first story. B ut I loved all the stories so much!

2 months ago