yapyapxy

Singapore

Senior Peer Reviewer
the world is wide enough

Message from Writer

Former Write the World young writer, now mentoring other WtW young writers through peer reviews! :-)

I still write, here and there and on and off; you can check out my blog at daybreakandtheuniverse.wordpress.com or my photography on Instagram @partemis_

yapyapxy (Singapore)() reviewed:

but what if i don't think everyone's an artist?

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I love how this poem seemed so easy and light-hearted to read at first glance, yet leaves you with a lingering, unsure feeling after the end. I did not expect myself ending up liking this so much haha but I...

3 days ago

yapyapxy (Singapore)() reviewed:

The Adventure Begins #romanticize

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An interesting premise that promises magic, romance, and adventure! You clearly have a knack for show-not-tell and I'd love to see more of it when it comes to Elyse and Liam's relationship. The story set up also reminded me of...

3 days ago

yapyapxy (Singapore)() started following poetri (United States of America)()

6 days ago

yapyapxy (Singapore)() reviewed:

Who will be Responsible for our Lives?

PROMPT: Environmental Journalism Competition 2020

This is one of the few essays I'm trying to review so it was refreshing to read about a topic I care about too! I think the title was very promising and sets up a compelling argument for why we...

6 days ago

yapyapxy (Singapore)() reviewed:

Anyone

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I liked how it starts off with one scene, one moment, before we see the many moments of emotional struggle the narrator undergoes through the repetition of the motif "walking away". The turning point of "someone" to "anyone" was carried...

11 days ago

yapyapxy (Singapore)() reviewed:

(why angels cry)|a prayer for strength for my girls #apoemaday31

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Honestly, I really loved this poem because it speaks so much with so little words. I have a soft spot for angels because I think that it is such a lovely word. I think this poem beautifully captured the selfless...

13 days ago

yapyapxy (Singapore)() liked (checkmate) #apoemaday23 by babybluelamentations (United States of America)()

20 days ago

yapyapxy (Singapore)() reviewed:

vaulted hearts

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My interpretation is a conversation from the heart to the mind/body, and thus, to the person. I was quite piqued by the first POV narration of the heart and wondered what the heart had to say. The main issue for...

21 days ago

yapyapxy (Singapore)() reviewed:

the silver tears of fallen wishes are a beautiful despair that reflect my depthless, porcelain heart #kickoff

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This felt like a form of prose poetry for me, and I would've liked for the writer to challenge the form further by pushing for more of the out-of-this-world descriptions! Don't be afraid to experiment with metaphors and work your...

26 days ago

yapyapxy (Singapore)() reviewed:

we are not meant to know | #apoemaday19

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I found your thoughtful poem on the eternal question a unique take: many have tried to define the afterlife, and here is the poem stating we don't know, because we are not meant to know. That was quite interesting to...

26 days ago