yapyapxy

Singapore

Senior Peer Reviewer
the world is wide enough

Message from Writer

Former Write the World young writer, now mentoring other WtW young writers through peer reviews! :-)

I still write, here and there and on and off; you can check out my blog at daybreakandtheuniverse.wordpress.com or my photography on Instagram @partemis_

yapyapxy (Singapore) started following agustdv (United Arab Emirates)

5 months ago

yapyapxy (Singapore) reviewed:

Taking Flight

FREE WRITING

Hi Chloe_Cat! I hope you're keeping safe during these times. First off, I wanted to applaud you for trying new genres! It can feel a little foreign and you might not be too familiar with some techniques, hence why I...

8 months ago

yapyapxy (Singapore) reviewed:

Dear America (2)

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I like the idea of this piece, of directly talking to America. One thing I was unsure of is who exactly "America" is and who "they" are - in my interpretation, I think "they" might refer to the children and...

9 months ago

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9 months ago

yapyapxy (Singapore) reviewed:

In The Eye Of The Storm

PROMPT: Open Prompt

I really like the premise of this story because I feel like we don't read enough about refugees who might not have the chance to voice out their stories. You have some really nice turn of phrases that I would...

9 months ago

yapyapxy (Singapore) liked false alarm by N. (United States)

9 months ago

yapyapxy (Singapore) reviewed:

I am still in love

PROMPT: Love After Love

I couldn't help but notice that you like to begin lines with "and", so I wondered if it was a stylistic choice. I felt that some lines might have come across more straightforwardly without the "and" (I feel that "and"...

9 months ago

yapyapxy (Singapore) reviewed:

yellow and blue

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I like the feeling of capturing a memory, which I feel this does because it transports you to the moment of writing in the morning. This piece felt more like a sketch - the scenes flit quickly and the crux...

9 months ago

yapyapxy (Singapore) reviewed:

so much is happening and here we are

PROMPT: Zoom Out

I really like the title! For me, the title conveyed a sort of quiet acquiescence with how things are now, and I wanted to know what was the significance of her situation to the narrator. I was hoping for what...

9 months ago

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9 months ago