River Rae

United States

I love:
-Vaquitas (look it up it is a real animal)
-Wolves
-Reading and writing
-Singing
-Learning
-Reading and writing deserve to be here twice
-My dogs

Message from Writer

I believe every story can make a difference to someone.
Even the most insignificant story could be the most impactful of it's time.
So look up from the computer screen and out at the world.
Then write what matters.

Peer Reviews

The cost of flying

FREE WRITING

This is amazing!

about 1 month

Our Stories (Footnotes)

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I love this piece! It captures so much in such a short piece.

2 months

Experimental Book (feedback please!)

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Hopefully you keep writing this, it's amazing!

3 months

"Never Alone"

PROMPT: Song Writing Competition 2021

3 months

The Dance | Part 1

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There were a few spelling errors I corrected but other then that it's great!

3 months

A Magical New Story | A-Review-For-A-Review!

PROMPT: Song Writing Competition 2021

It would be great if you could make a video with this song. Do you have a tune in mind or did you just write the lyrics without a tune?

3 months

The Bombing of City 13666

PROMPT: Numerous Narrators

Great job! You managed to create a very real world with very real people that makes me want to keep reading.

3 months

A little one liner :)

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3 months

Cheater, Cheatest Part 1

PROMPT: Numerous Narrators

This is a really great plot so far and can't wait to see what happens next should you continue to write it!

3 months

100

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I have no additional comments except for good job!

3 months

|[free]|

PROMPT: 25 Words

I really like this piece. It has the right amount of intrigue and mystery while not being to confusing, or worse, boring.

3 months

May 10th, 1933

PROMPT: 25 Words

I think the first sentence is slightly confusing until you read the rest. I would suggest refrazing it ever so slightly. Maybe split the first sentence into two? I know it's difficult to do while sticking to 25 words, and I think for a story this short it doesn't matter too much but it is good habit for future writing.

3 months