Noctuarie

United States

17 | She/her

Sharing some writing and having some fun.

Peer Reviews

Not Our Fault

PROMPT: Single Greatest Challenge

I love the meaning behind this poem, and it has such a great impact on the reader.

4 months

Cheat, Cheater, Cheatest Part 1

PROMPT: Numerous Narrators

I love what the perspectives add to this story, and it's very unique. Lovely job!

4 months

9 Truths

FREE WRITING

This is beautifully written, your writing style is fantastic!

4 months

Un-Titled Novel, Chapter 1

FREE WRITING

Overall, I think this is great, I hope to see future chapters of it, even if it's updated sporadically.

4 months

Shoe Laces

PROMPT: Extraordinary in the Ordinary

This is so well done, I think the sudden transition from the happy tone of the togetherness of the laces to the envy of the author is great.

4 months

Your Queen (a song)

FREE WRITING

This is amazing, songwriting is incredibly difficult and this came out great!

4 months

Fatal Nights

FREE WRITING

I love this, it's a very tense and suspenseful story.

4 months

poetry

FREE WRITING

I just found this really funny and cute, a lovely short poem.

4 months

The school trilogy: Lost World (Chapter 1)

FREE WRITING

Wonderful start to your story!

4 months

those who lie

FREE WRITING

I think the quote fits the poem well!

4 months

Machine

FREE WRITING

This reminds me of Detroit: Become Human mixed with The Tell-Tale Heart. It's amazing, and I love the moral issues it brings up!

4 months

The Monster Under My Fridge Gave Up His Stale Tortillas for the Monster Under my Couch

FREE WRITING

Reading this was a lot of fun, I do hope you continue with the story of these monsters. I found the ending to be cute, even if you did get lazy which is hard to see, I think it was fitting to the tone of the story and a satisfying ending. Also I've never written a review before- so I hope this helps!

9 months