feverish saltwater

United States

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Heyo, Salty here. I'm new and I thought I'd try this out. I've written lots over the years but I still have lots to learn. I want to share some of my writing, including poetry, prose, and the book I've been working on the past couple of months called Willow Blossoms and Wheat Grass. I hope ya'll like it and give honest feedback on how I can improve my writing and book. XD.

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feverish saltwater (United States) published:

Oh Atlas REVIEW FOR REVIEW

PROMPT: Song Writing Competition 2021

Oh Atlas, one of the Twelve Titans,
son of Lapetus and Clymene,
your reign is coming to an end.
Twelve new gods are coming to cease Olympus.
Atlas, quick band together with your brethren,
follow Cronos to battle.

Oh Atlas, titan of heaven and earth,
what have you done?
Oh Atlas, what a mess you've become.
Atlas you've become the bearer of heaven and earth,
careful has to not be squished between their attraction.
Oh Atlas, your time had come, ...

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11 days ago

feverish saltwater (United States) published:

This Everything

PROMPT: 25 Words

This heart pounds so rapid in this chest. Frenzied and feverish, this heart slows. Blue lips and misty eyes. This pulse is dead in me.

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16 days ago

feverish saltwater (United States) liked Sitting with the stars by Starlitskies (Sri Lanka)

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feverish saltwater (United States) published:

Oh Atlas REVIEW FOR REVIEW

PROMPT: Song Writing Competition 2021

Oh Atlas, one of the Twelve Titans,
son of Lapetus and Clymene,
your reign is coming to an end.
Twelve new gods are coming to cease Olympus.
Atlas, quick band together with your brethren,
follow Cronos to battle.

Oh Atlas, titan of heaven and earth,
what have you done?
Oh Atlas, what a mess you've become.
Atlas you've become the bearer of heaven and earth,
careful has to not be squished between their attraction.
Oh Atlas, your time had come, ...

Seeking Peer Reviews

21 days ago

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feverish saltwater (United States) published:

Old loving heartache REVIEW FOR A REVIEW

FREE WRITING

I sat with my old lover
heels pressed into concrete
and toes into grass.
On the steps we used to sit,
while ice cream melted down our wrists in the sweltering summer sun,
where the sprinkler used to spray our freckles.
The evening was late,
with twilight just beginning to eat away the light.
Stars gleamed overhead as always
but only shined dimmer in your eyes.
My old lover tangled his fingers in my curls,
and breathed my name with...

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about 1 month ago

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feverish saltwater (United States) published:

Our Bones

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Our bones have their own gravity,
Stardust bound and pressed hard by this attraction.
Sinewy muscle of steel and iron,
icy triumph caught in our cold eyes
ashes of stars that once were, 
exist within our viens.

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about 1 month ago

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