PROMPT: February Grab Bag
I thought this was a really well-written piece, and I love the effect your short sentences have on the tone. It gives me John Green vibes-- love it!
3 days
FREE WRITING
I want a part two! This seems really good so far, and I can tell you're a gifted writer. I left a few ideas/comments that might be helpful, but, if not, remember it's your writing, and you don't have to use them. :)
2 months
FREE WRITING
Overall, this was a really good piece! My only suggestion would be that the end feels a bit abrupt-- maybe add how the protagonist is feeling at the end of this talk.
2 months
PROMPT: A Ritual for Now
I think this ritual is really relatable to a lot of us, and it made me want to go swing! I think we could all use a return to childhood in these times...
2 months
PROMPT: Pandemic Memoir
I love the way this sums up 2020-- couldn't have said it better myself.
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