serein

United States

[Child of God]
formerly "in_love_with_writing"
Call me Ari if you like. (or any other nickname--my name is ariana)
Girl | INFJ-T | aspire to be teacher, (author?) | ATEEZ| I'm not half as obsessed with kpop as I seem...

Message from Writer

Shoutout to my lovely friends (go follow them!)
AliMuscles04
rainey grace
Lata B.
Ren
Rohan's Defender (my ranting about kpop buddy)
✧♬TwinklingLights♬✧

probably headbanging to ATEEZ, and/or crying to "She's in the Rain" by The Rose.

serein: the fine rain that falls from a clear sky at sunset or in the early hours of the night.

Rant at me in the comments--I'm sooooo bored.

#giveusbackourwords

(lol I would put song recommendations here, but I don't want to scare y'all.)

Peer Reviews

Punishment

FREE WRITING

Great job with this!! All you really need to do is clarify a couple things. Other than that, this is perfect! And please don't feel obligated to take any of these suggestions. It's up to you! Keep up the good work!

2 months

aurora borealis

FREE WRITING

I really, really enjoyed reading this! I'm still trying to wrap my mind around writing this during writer's block... But anyway, it is totally up to you whether to implement any of these suggestions. This is truly beautiful, and I hope that this review was helpful! Great job!

2 months

Be insane with me

FREE WRITING

I really, REALLY love this piece. It is basically perfect the way it is, so you can choose whether or not to take any of these suggestions. Also I know this piece is short--I promise I didn't choose it because of the length! If there is something else you need reviewed, just tell me. (and if you ever need something reviewed in the future, just tell me! I'll be more than happy to review it!)

3 months

Rivers (READ MESSAGE BOARD)

FREE WRITING

This piece is already so perfect you don't need to take any of my suggestions if you don't want to. This was SO beautiful, every time I read it I fall more in love. All I hope is that this review was helpful! (Also, what competition is this for? Just curious :))

3 months

Not Yet Gone, No Matter The Coverups

PROMPT: Op-Ed Competition 2021

Please don't use any of these suggestions if you don't want to! They are only suggestions! I hope this was helpful <3

3 months

Riddle of the Woods Chapter Two (Looking for Peer Reviews)

FREE WRITING

I am so sorry this review is so late. I swear I DID NOT LET YOU DOWN I was just so busy this week with homework. I'm honestly so flattered that you asked me for a review--I'm so bad at them XD. Once again, I'm so sorry it took me years to do this. I hope it's not too late. Great job! Keep up the good work!

5 months

Two girls go in none leave

FREE WRITING

Just remember to pay attention to grammar, otherwise it's great!

6 months

Two girls go in none leave

FREE WRITING

This is really awesome and with a little bit of cleaning of could be wonderful! Great job so far!

6 months

My Attempt At Some Limericks

FREE WRITING

I think you get the point, so I'll stop (I think I've been repeating myself a little, and I know you get it by now. The last poem is for you to fix without me bothering you.) I don't want you to think you've done badly. Limericks are hard to write, and you have a great start! You just need to fix the syllables! Please don't feel obligated to take any of these suggestions. (I'm not very good at reviewing poetry.) However, if you need a review on something, just comment on one of my pieces and I'll try and get to it.

6 months

I CAN

PROMPT: Mid-December Grab Bag

Really great job! Once again, these are some very small details that needed to be adjusted, but feel free not to take any of my suggestions! I'm very bad at reviews :)

6 months

Riddle of the Woods Beginning (Looking For Peer Review)

FREE WRITING

Please feel free not to use ANY of these suggestions. I don't want you to think that you aren't doing a good job; you are doing phenominally, and I can't wait for more! I'm really bad at reviews (this is like my second one) so just keep in mind that I don't know much more than you on this. Keep up the good work!

6 months

The runaway Part 1

FREE WRITING

These are only suggestions. so please don't fell obligated to use them! I think you did a wonderful job, and this story seems really intriguing! I'm guessing you're new (since you haven't posted much) so welcome! If you have any questions, just comment them on one of my pieces! You seem super talented!

7 months