Mespotz

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ᴛɪʟ ᴛʜᴇʏ ᴄᴏᴠᴇʀ ᴍᴇ ɪɴ ᴅᴀɪꜱɪᴇꜱ, ᴅᴀɪꜱɪᴇꜱ, ᴅᴀɪꜱɪᴇꜱ

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ɪ ʟᴏᴠᴇ ᴛᴏ ᴡʀɪᴛᴇ, ᴀɴᴅ ɪ ᴇɴᴊᴏʏ ʀᴇᴀᴅɪɴɢ ᴀɴᴅ ᴡᴀᴛᴄʜɪɴɢ ᴍᴀᴅᴀᴍ ꜱᴇᴄʀᴇᴛᴀʀʏ ɪɴ ᴍʏ ꜰʀᴇᴇ ᴛɪᴍᴇ. ɪ ᴀʟꜱᴏ ʟᴏᴠᴇ ᴘᴏʟɪᴛɪᴄꜱ ᴀɴᴅ ʀᴇᴠɪᴇᴡꜱ. ɪ'ᴍ ᴀ ʜᴜɢᴇ ᴍᴀʀᴠᴇʟ ꜰᴀɴ.

ᴏʜ, ᴍʀ. ʜᴏʟᴍᴇꜱ. ɪꜰ ɪᴛ ᴡᴀꜱ ᴛʜᴇ ᴇɴᴅ ᴏꜰ ᴛʜᴇ ᴡᴏʀʟᴅ, ɪꜰ ᴛʜɪꜱ ᴡᴇʀᴇ ᴛʜᴇ ᴠᴇʀʏ ʟᴀꜱᴛ ɴɪɢʜᴛ, ᴡᴏᴜʟᴅ ʏᴏᴜ ʜᴀᴠᴇ ᴅɪɴɴᴇʀ ᴡɪᴛʜ ᴍᴇ?

ᴍᴀᴋᴇ ᴀɴʏᴏɴᴇ ᴄʀʏ ᴛᴏᴅᴀʏ? - ᴘᴇɢɢʏ ᴄᴀʀᴛᴇʀ
ꜱᴀᴅʟʏ ɴᴏ, ʙᴜᴛ ɪᴛ'ꜱ ᴏɴʟʏ 4:30 - ᴅᴏᴛᴛɪᴇ ᴜɴᴅᴇʀᴡᴏᴏᴅ

ᴍᴏʀɢᴀɴᴀ ᴘᴇɴᴅʀᴀɢᴏɴ/ʟᴇɴᴀ ʟᴜᴛʜᴏʀ/ᴍᴀʀɪᴀ ᴏꜱᴛʀᴏᴠᴀ/ʜᴇʟᴀ/ᴅᴏᴛᴛɪᴇ ᴜɴᴅᴇʀᴡᴏᴏᴅ/ᴍᴀʟᴇꜰɪᴄᴇɴᴛ/ɪʀᴇɴᴇ ᴀᴅʟᴇʀ/ᴇᴜʀᴜꜱ ʜᴏʟᴍᴇꜱ/ᴍᴏʀɢᴀᴜꜱᴇ ʟᴇ ꜰᴀʏ

ɪꜰ ʏᴏᴜ ᴄᴀɴ ʀᴜʟᴇ ᴛʜᴇ ᴡᴏʀʟᴅ, ᴡʜʏ ᴅᴏɴ'ᴛ ʏᴏᴜ?

ꜱɪᴅᴇ ɴᴏᴛᴇ:
ꜱᴏᴍᴇᴏɴᴇ ʀᴇᴀᴅ ᴛʜɪꜱ, ɪᴛ'ꜱ ᴘᴜʀᴇ ɢᴏʟᴅ. ʙʏ ᴀʙɪ'ꜱ ᴘᴏᴠ; https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/219438/version/459224

Mespotz (United States) reviewed:

Monsters with beautiful heart & ugly skin

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Try making "heart" in the title plural, because there are more than one monster(You made the word "monster" plural in the title). Otherwise, I really love this piece and you can choose whether or not to accept my suggestions!

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they assumed i made assumptions.

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i told them they were wrong but they     assumed i made assumptions
there was right and there was left but they led me     wrong     at the junction
i asked them whether always growling ever     hurt their throats
why they sacrifice their cruise ships and save their sinking boats

they said they never growled but     no good words     escaped their mouths
their sinking boats were cruise ships because     wastage wasn't allowed

their hearts need some mending, but...
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today

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Verse 1
Imagination in the darkness
Like the darkness feeds my soul 
Like my mind is the guppy
Breaking out of its fishbowl

Verse 2
When the dusk falls to night
When the blankets are around you tight
Oh, dear, nothing protects you 
My monsters love the light

Pre-Chorus
Let yourself succumb,
Dear, let yourself succumb.
When this is all over,
I'll let your mind go numb

Chorus
It's coursing through my veins(my veins)
You couldn't believe the things I've...
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