mbrosnan (Australia) published:

The Mother, The Daughter and the Holy Ghost

PROMPT: Novel Writing Competition 2020

The walls were listening. They seemed to etch forward, cramming their ears to hear what I had to say.
“Speak up child” snapped Father Wilderbear from behind the thin brown wood, I couldn’t see his old, raisin-like face— but I knew it was scrunched up in disgust, like when I smell tuna.

I don’t like Confession.

But Sister Paul and Sister Lucy make my class and I go every Wednesday, so we are cleansed for Mass— to receive the Holy...
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