Finnispace9

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Finnispace9 (United States) published:

It Matters Not

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It came to me in the shadows
Like the edges of a brick, icy and brutal
Blood trickled, it boiled and weeped
It matters not. 

She is my daughter, she is my eyes. 
He is my son, he is my life. 
The rain drank, the red they spilled
But who cares?

The Others are careful
And they are careless
They do not know the money-less, the broken
To them, there is no hunger
Not for anything.

Oh King, do my cries...

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Finnispace9 (United States) published:

Legends of the Unknown

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I fear the unknown

The deep crevices of the silent dark
Or the end of the depth under the torn sky 
In the valley, I must carelessly plunge

Why is change life’s constant?
For isn’t constant meant as comfort?
Some tell me to move with the wind, let it guide you, let it move you in ways deeper than the skin
But then would the choice still be mine?

Her eyes were soft, her hand on the door
The light...

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Finnispace9 (United States) reviewed:

My name

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I like the consistency of your tone throughout your poem. You use keywords such as "gravestones," "crawling" as well as "old photographs" and "ancient" and that almost, repetition, helps keep the mood of the poem from becoming unintentionally inconsistent. Awesome...

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