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Bailee

Australia

You may be wondering what makes me different from you or the person in the corner? Well not a lot really, I write on here, on Wattpad, and singing is my life. I'm striving to one day perform on Broadway... hopefully. I honestly just love feedback!

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Hey everyone! I would really appreciate some constructive criticism. I struggle a lot with grammar. I would love to gain feedback about how I could improve this... thanks! From a girl you don't know!

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Bailee (Australia) published:

Brothers

PROMPT: All Talk

It's been a while since we've sat up here, Mason.
It has been, last time we sat in this tree was when we were just kids.
Do you remember when it would start to get dark and Mum would yell out from halfway across the field, "Riley, Mason, you two boys get in here right now!"
Yeah that was pretty funny, and Charlotte would be acting like a goody two shoes inside.
She always had a one leg up from...

about 1 year ago

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Bailee (Australia) published:

Drifting Pink Balloons

PROMPT: 1 Photo, 100 Words

They glided effortlessly through the endless blue. Their pale pink heads ballooned and deflated, mesmerising inquisitive eyes. Intently she watched, drawn into the loop of the circulating jellyfish. Up and down, back and forth their tentacles swooped miraculously through the water, managing to miss one another each time. Curiously she watched and wondered if her life would be simpler if she could join the pink blobs in their circles, flowing and effortlessness. She imagined plunging into the deep blue, her...

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Fledgling

PROMPT: Flash Fiction Competition 2016

Well done! Keep writing, you have some fabulous work here.

almost 2 years ago

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Bailee (Australia) published:

Dear Future Bailee

PROMPT: Dear Me

Dear Me,

I could ask all of the cliche questions like "what are you up to now? Did you stick to your dreams." However, I won't. Instead, I want to focus on life right now (your past). 

You are 17, love singing, your friends and family and could think of doing nothing else in life than theatre. Your passion lies with the stage, you really are a theatre fanatic, typical. Do you remember you were 12 when you first wanted...

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almost 2 years ago

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Bailee (Australia) published:

Click

PROMPT: Flash Fiction Competition 2016

I narrow my eyes upon my target, Anthony stands firm, his legs in a straddle position. I wet my lips, placing my hand on the holster. 

"It's almost high noon," he announces.

I nod simply in reply. The air's tension is thick as our eyes narrow with every breath. I can see his concentration. Our hand's rest on the handles, the slick silver waiting with anticipation. 

"Draw!" He shouts. 

Simultaneously the silver flashes quickly in the light. Click. My knees...

almost 2 years ago

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Bailee (Australia) published:

The Things They Carried

PROMPT: The Things They Carried

Upon a lit stage they stood in a uniform line gazing up into the mezzanine. Draped in in long black robes their eyes held onto every hope and dream as 'Bring on Tomorrow' from Fame escaped their lips. They knew there were hundreds of eyes watching them, observing their every move; they needed to succeed. With them, they carried graduation hats tucked under their arms as they became lost in the song, their real graduation wasn't far. Time was running out...

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The Things They Carried

PROMPT: The Things They Carried

Upon a lit stage they stood in a uniform line gazing up into the mezzanine. Draped in in long black robes their eyes held onto every hope and dream as 'Bring on Tomorrow' from Fame escaped their lips. They knew there were hundreds of eyes watching them, observing their every move; they needed to succeed. With them, they carried graduation hats tucked under their arms as they became lost in the song, their real graduation wasn't far. Time was running out...

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about 2 years ago

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