Ella C

United States

Hey guys I'm simply a high school girl who likes to write! (basic yes I know)

Message from Writer

If you are reading this you are most likely reading my writing. Please feel free to critique I could use some criticism to grow more as a writer! (Also I can't figure out why the first one posted twice on accident so sorry)
Kindly,
Ella

Ella C (United States) published:

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PROMPT: Speechwriting Competition 2020

Has anyone here ever had a goal they wanted to accomplish? Have you ever wanted to change something in your life: a relationship, a habit, an exercise schedule, a diet. I know I have. In the end, did you meet your goal? Did you succeed? Or did you give up and stop pushing yourself? Again, ladies and gentlemen, I have. 

Now before you quit, did you stop to think of the original reason for your goal? Did you imagine yourself...

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Ella C (United States) published:

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PROMPT: Speechwriting Competition 2020

Has anyone here ever had a goal they wanted to accomplish? Did you want to finish a book or pick up your grades? Did you want to change something in your life: a relationship, a habit, an exercise schedule, a diet. In the end, did you meet your goal? Did you succeed? Or did you give up? Did you stop pushing yourself because it became too difficult and you just didn't have the willpower anymore. Did you lose your inspiration? 
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4 days ago

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Ella C (United States) published:

Can you see?

PROMPT: Speechwriting Competition 2020

Has anyone here ever had a goal they wanted to accomplish? Did you want to finish a book or pick up your grades? Did you want to change something in your life: a relationship, a habit, an exercise schedule, a diet. In the end, did you meet your goal? Did you succeed? Or did you give up? Did you stop pushing yourself because it became too difficult and you just didn't have the willpower anymore. Did you lose your inspiration? 
...

Seeking Peer Reviews

4 days ago