Amber Lightning

United States

Grade: 9th
Pronouns: She/Her
Likes: Skiing, Art & Music, Science & Space
Random Fact: I am missing an adult tooth

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Amber Lightning (United States) liked Hayloft by Amber Lightning (United States)

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Amber Lightning (United States) published:

Hayloft

PROMPT: 25 Words

"Dancing in the dark," the stereo sings. Damon comes up from behind me, finishing the verse, and lifts me by my waist off the stepladder.

about 2 months ago

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Amber Lightning (United States) liked Hayloft by Amber Lightning (United States)

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Amber Lightning (United States) published:

Hayloft

PROMPT: 25 Words

"Dancing in the dark," the stereo sings. Damon comes up from behind me finishing the verse, and lifts me by my waist off the stepladder.

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Amber Lightning (United States) liked Flipside Effervescent by Amber Lightning (United States)

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Amber Lightning (United States) published:

Flipside Effervescent

PROMPT: Song Writing Competition 2021

<intro>
<First Verse>
First deception past perfection
The anticipation friction
Don’t we have the wrong perception?
Seen from another dimension?
Ask a question turn direction
Some don’t bother mention that when
You see your reflection think
The worlds out of your comprehension

They the people rise
Leaving tears in their wake
So they dream but when they wake
They can’t see their mistake
But they know the ache   
Like a taking heartbreak
Though they see the light sinking
They don’t...

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Amber Lightning (United States) published:

Hayloft

PROMPT: 25 Words

"Dancing in the dark," Ed Sheeran sang. Jesse came up from behind me, duster in hand, and lifted me by my waist off the stepladder. 

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Amber Lightning (United States) reviewed:

the sacrifice

PROMPT: 25 Words

The title in all lowercase adds a nice touch, you could consider making the last line all lowercase too. Also maybe put the onomatopoeia italicized, but I like that it's in bold and the way it stands out in contrast...

2 months ago