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Wow! I was blown away by this piece. It is personal and relatable, technically perfect, and uses language to draw the reader in. I could suggest longer paragraphs for variation, but I'm sure you have used these short paragraphs for effect. Perhaps if it were longer, extended from the front, a long mundane prose could be effective. Congrats. I am excited to read more of your work. :)
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