sophiacollins

New Zealand

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sophiacollins (New Zealand) published:

Carol

PROMPT: Novel Writing Competition 2020

Pop music fills the brightly lit store, blinding Carol and causing a shattering sequeal to be let out through her lips. Her tasteless Nike sneakers aggressively scuff the lino floor, and she grumbles at a small child in front of her. The rosy-cheeked boy, around six or seven years old smiles up at Carol’s face. Her wrinkles are accentuated by the harsh lights, turning her ugly. He mistakenly steps forward; some children have yet to develop the highly essential sixth...

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sophiacollins (New Zealand) published:

Carol

PROMPT: Novel Writing Competition 2020

Pop music fills the brightly lit store, blinding Carol and causing a shattering sequel to be let out through her lips. Her tasteless Nike sneakers aggressively scuff the lino floor, and she grumbles at a small child in front of her. The rosy-cheeked boy, around six or seven years old smiles up at Carol’s face. Her wrinkles are accentuated by the harsh lights, turning her ugly. He mistakenly steps forward; some children have yet to develop the highly essential sixth...

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