Treblemaker (United States) published:
PROMPT: Given First Line
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Treblemaker (United States) liked Two Dimensional Oscillations by Zinnia123 (United States)
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Treblemaker (United States) published:
FREE WRITING
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Treblemaker (United States) reviewed:
FREE WRITING
Check 'stollen' (stolen) I kinda want a part two with the sun stolen, what a beautiful writing style you have.
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Treblemaker (United States) reviewed:
FREE WRITING
Look for places to add punctuation.
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Treblemaker (United States) published:
PROMPT: Given First Line
"Ships at a distance have every man's wish on board. Airplanes float with the jubilant echo's of bright dreams. Trains racing by are spurred by man's tumbling thoughts, trapped between the pistons." One said.
"What does that make you and I?" Asked the other.
"Corpses don't have wishes. Or pressing thoughts. All of that has gone with our last breath."
"Then why do I still... feel?"
"Because you have only just turned over. You are still attached."
The ghost...
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