Treblemaker
United States
I write because the music of language spoke to me in books and I wanted to make a beautiful noise to answer back -- Lee Martin
Message from Writer
The noblest art is that of making others happy- PT Barnum
Secrete Child of Apollo, Aquarius, 17
In love with Mint Ice cream but all ice cream is greatly appreciated
Favorite TV show is the Umbrella Academy
You are braver than you think, kinder than you seem, and smarter than you know.
Joined 10/5/2020
Treblemaker (United States) published:
Crystal Fog: A Ghost Story
PROMPT: Given First Line
"Ships at a distance have every man's wish on board. Airplanes float with the jubilant echoes of bright dreams. Trains racing by are spurred by man's tumbling thoughts, trapped between the pistons." One said.
"What does that make you and I?" Asked the other.
"Corpses don't have wishes. Or pressing thoughts. All of that has gone with our last breath."
"Then why do I still... feel?"
"Because you have...
3 days ago
Treblemaker (United States) liked Two Dimensional Oscillations by Zinnia123 (United States)
3 days ago
Treblemaker (United States) published:
Crystal Fog: A Ghost Story
FREE WRITING
"Ships at a distance have every man's wish on board. Airplanes float with the jubilant echoes of bright dreams. Trains racing by are spurred by man's tumbling thoughts, trapped between the pistons." One said.
"What does that make you and I?" Asked the other.
"Corpses don't have wishes. Or pressing thoughts. All of that has gone with our last breath."
"Then why do I still... feel?"
"Because you have...
4 days ago
Treblemaker (United States) reviewed:
Moon Stolen
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Check 'stollen' (stolen) I kinda want a part two with the sun stolen, what a beautiful writing style you have.
4 days ago
Treblemaker (United States) reviewed:
Melting Milkshakes, Fluorescents, and Cafeteria Fries
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Look for places to add punctuation.
6 days ago
Treblemaker (United States) published:
Crystal Fog: A Ghost Story
PROMPT: Given First Line
"Ships at a distance have every man's wish on board. Airplanes float with the jubilant echo's of bright dreams. Trains racing by are spurred by man's tumbling thoughts, trapped between the pistons." One said.
"What does that make you and I?" Asked the other.
"Corpses don't have wishes. Or pressing thoughts. All of that has gone with our last breath."
"Then why do I still... feel?"
"Because you have only just turned over. You are still attached."
The ghost...
20 days ago