Gabbi

Not willing to say my age
Inspiring writer (it’s my dream)
Open to criticism
Ravenclaw/hufflepuff

Message from Writer

Judge me as much as you wish, you can say whatever you wish, pg please. I need as much criticism as possible

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Gabbi published:

My 2020 questions

PROMPT: Mid-December Grab Bag

Write a poem using only questions.-prompt 

Why is this year this messed up?

Why did God betray us?

Why every election year?

Why can’t we just decide?

Why don’t we treat the Earth better?

Why have we messed up so badly?

When will we change?
Seeking Peer Reviews

4 months ago

Gabbi started following Shay (Malaysia)

5 months ago

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Gabbi published:

Sad story (not true)

PROMPT: Novel Writing Competition 2020

This is my life, I’ll tell you how it went

I’m a only child, I know it seems cool and all but it’s not. It’s sucks. I’m always lonely and I don’t have any friends
 “that girl is so weird” I’ve heard that mumbled thousands of times. It’s always circling in my head, round and round. Like I’m not allowed to forget about it. 
 “they don’t know what weird is” I always wanted to say somet...

5 months ago

Gabbi published:

Sad story (not true)

PROMPT: Novel Writing Competition 2020

This is my life, I’ll tell you how it went

I’m a only child, I know it seems cool and all but it’s not. It’s sucks. I’m always lonely and I don’t have any friends
 “that girl is so weird” I’ve heard that mumbled thousands of times. It’s always circling in my head, round and round. Like I’m not allowed to forget about it. 
 “they don’t know what weird is” I always wanted to say sometching...

5 months ago

Gabbi started following friends is awesome (United States)

5 months ago

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Gabbi published:

Watching from the outside

PROMPT: November Grab Bag

Write a poem that includes the word "watch" three times.

We all have seen it, looking at us,
watching.
thats all it does.
it watches from the sky,
from the stars.
it watches from the trees, 
from the seas. 
that’s all it ever does.
thats all it ever will do.
with its wings spread 
although it never takes flight.
it seems to find things that are out of the ordinary
it makes a appearance and just sits...

Seeking Peer Reviews

5 months ago

Gabbi published:

The unknown destination

PROMPT: Given First Line

"Ships at a distance have every man's wish on board." Beginning line by Hurston

The ships crew all worked as hard as they could, they didn’t fully know what they were working for or who. They never went on the deck, they always worked bellow, they didn’t know where they were heading. They had seen the jewels loaded on but they never went too close to them. The workers dreams were never cared for, they almost forgotten them all together. The...
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5 months ago

Gabbi published:

Sad story (not true)

PROMPT: Novel Writing Competition 2020

This is my life, I’ll tell you how it went

I’m a only child, I know it seems cool and all but it’s not. It’s sucks. I’m always lonely and I don’t have any friends
 “that girl is so weird” I’ve heard that mumbled thousands of times. It’s always circling in my head, round and round. Like I’m not allowed to forget about it. 
 “they don’t know what weird is” I always wanted to say so,etching...

5 months ago

Gabbi published:

Sad story (not true)

PROMPT: Novel Writing Competition 2020

This is my life, I’ll tell you how it went

I’m a only child, I know it seems cool and all but it’s not. It’s sucks. I’m always lonely and I don’t have any friends
 “that girl is so weird” I’ve heard that mumbled thousands of times. It’s always circling in my head, round and round. Like I’m not allowed to forget about it. 
 “they don’t know what weird is” I always wanted to say so,etching...
Seeking Peer Reviews

5 months ago

Gabbi liked A Whistle In The Wind by Abigail Benzing (United States)

5 months ago