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mariemare

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if you care about my emotional well-being in anyway don't read my first two pieces. ever.

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mariemare (Australia) published:

i can't dance but they can

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when my bones went their separate ways,
   step by step my body sunk closer,
they left with snaps, silky breaks,
    leap by leap my body lowered.

they reunited with the waltz in mind,
north
        south
and
        east 
they unwound.
their first time letting loose,

they beat their heads against eachother,
whilst humming their tabula rasa tune.

my bones argued and clinked,
they nearly shattered few, but wait!
my bones remembered...

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mariemare (Australia) published:

sunsets

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How unorthodox is that the skyline bleeds,
I don't doubt that the aboriginal stories of beginning aren't true,
Some cruel man pierced the sun and it hid in the trees,
And now it leaks seemingly for you.
 

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mariemare (Australia) reviewed:

shower thoughts after a bike ride home

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i really liked the title by the way. another thing i thought you could do is space it out? so then it has more clarity in it's stanza's (if that's what you were going for).

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