jj1325

United States

I am a student with big dreams and ambition, who enjoys writing for fun. Any constructive criticism or positive feedback is always welcome!

Message from Writer

"If your dreams don't scare you they aren't big enough." -Unknown

Peer Reviews

Courage

FREE WRITING

Overall great poem! Maybe you might want to be a little more detailed or vague with some of the lines (let the mind do a bit more guesswork?) but overall it is a great poem with a very truthful and realistic message about a trait that is often made to seem fake and like people are born with it. You really drive the point that courage relies on circumstance.

over 4 years

Froot Loop

PROMPT: All Talk

This is a fantastic little story that made me feel all happy and fluffy! Keep writing!

about 5 years

and this is how you start over.

PROMPT: Quartet

This is so beautifully written! The message it conveys is powerful and the style makes everything so much more effective! Keep on writing!

about 5 years

The Open Confession

PROMPT: All Talk

unknown