Gail -u-

Hong Kong

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Gail -u- (Hong Kong) reviewed:

An Ode to Music

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Will I have another ship or will my ship sail? Jokes aside, I like how there's a lot of feeling and thoughts in this poem (?) but I feel like something is missing. (I'm not sure what, just something) Maybe...

about 4 years ago

Gail -u- (Hong Kong) liked Bribing Death by Grace Ow (Singapore)

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Gail -u- (Hong Kong) liked Bribing Death by Grace Ow (Singapore)

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Gail -u- (Hong Kong) liked Bribing Death by Grace Ow (Singapore)

almost 5 years ago

Gail -u- (Hong Kong) liked Wind's Whisper by Applecharm11 Starhorse (Singapore)

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Gail -u- (Hong Kong) published:

Prideful

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The male stands in the wind, letting the breeze calm his thoughts. His mind is clear, but his heart is still thumping loudly at his chest. He loses his calm again, his heart infecting his mind with images.

He takes a deep breath, attempting to calm himself. The images of her disappear and his heart calms, only for his heart rate to increase again, unable to contain his emotions. His heart constricting from fighting off his feelings.

The way her...

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