Avishi

United States

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Avishi (United States) published:

A thread of light

PROMPT: 25 Words

A thread of light linked her to the doorway. Her family, future, and end stood beyond. She severed the tie and didn't look back. 

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about 2 months ago

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Avishi (United States) published:

A thread of light

PROMPT: 25 Words

A thread of light linked her to the doorway. Her family, future, and end stood beyond. She severed the tie and didn't look back. 

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about 2 months ago

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Avishi (United States) published:

Hiding from the sun

PROMPT: Cli-Fi

Date: November 9, 2811 AD
Location: Mt Everest (alt 8848 m)
Temperature: 40.7 celsius (106.3 F)

My grandfather leaned back on his rickety chair and watched us children with weary eyes. "Alright, one more story he said." and the children cheered. "Tell us about the sun." someone asked. We had all heard the story of the sun before, or at least what is was before the great disaster, but we all listened with rapt attention wondering about what it could...

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5 months ago

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Avishi (United States) published:

The Nature in me

PROMPT: People as Nature

The touch me not is the side most people see in me
I blend in but come close and I will curl up my leaves
I curl up to protect myself from your lies and deceit
This side of me is gentle and innocent, like a calm blue sea

Snow leopards are always a rare sight to see
Just like the side that is locked deep inside of me
Push me to the edge and my claws will unsheathe 
My...

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7 months ago

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Avishi (United States) published:

The Nature in me

PROMPT: People as Nature

The touch me not is the side most people see in me
I blend in but come close and I will curl up my leaves
I curl up to protect myself from your lies and deceit
This side of me is gentle and innocent, like a calm blue sea

Snow leopards are always a rare sight to see
Just like the side that is locked deep inside of me
Push me to the edge and my claws will unsheathe 
My...

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7 months ago

Avishi (United States) reviewed:

If I was an animal

PROMPT: People as Nature

The ending was really powerful to me. No one truly known who they are but you should keep searching. The third section does deviated a bit from the flow of the first two but if thats how you intended it...

7 months ago

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Avishi (United States) published:

The Black Blizzard

PROMPT: Historical Fiction Competition 2020

For the third time this week I woke up coughing. I sat on my rickety bed and looked around my room. A fine layer of dust had settled everywhere, on my blankets, my desks even on the door handle. I had boarded up my windows in hope of keeping some of the dust out but my attempt had obviously been a failure. I peered out of the window to survey the damage that had occurred outside. For the past few...

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7 months ago