PROMPT: The Things They Carried
I love this piece! It's very engaging, your writing is impeccable and it takes an interesting twist on the challenge.
A little difficult to understand at times, but otherwise it was great! It was very expressive, engaging and captivating! I love how you were able to write the man perfectly! I think the man's phrases: "I-I, uh, really need you," and "You know how bad I am at expressing how I feel, but please don't leave,"; expressed his humanity and hesitance to describe himself perfectly. Great job!
almost 5 years