Sonia K

United States

Sonia K (United States) reviewed:

An Anomalous Valentine

PROMPT: Flash Fiction Competition 2020

I would recommend breaking it up a little bit more. There is a word limit, but not a page limit, so I would recommend that you take advantage of the enter key and have several shorter paragraphs.

5 months ago

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Sonia K (United States) published:

cracked peanut

PROMPT: Flash Fiction Competition 2020

I hate looking at peanut butter. I hate when the human smears a layer of the oozing, beige blood on her freshly sliced bread. I hate how she chews - her mouth chomping and vociferous.

Like she’s savoring murder. She finds joy in killing my family.

She finds joy in taking my friends, cracking them open with her French-manicured talons, and forcing them into her blender, until they are one big mess of terror. And then she eats them.

I...

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6 months ago

Sonia K (United States) published:

cracked peanut

PROMPT: Flash Fiction Competition 2020

I hate looking at peanut butter. I hate when that human smears a layer of the oozing, beige blood on her freshly sliced bread. I hate how she chews - her mouth chomping and vociferous.

Like she’s savoring murder. She finds joy in killing my family.

She finds joy in taking my friends, cracking them open with her French-manicured talons, and forcing them into her blender, until they are one big mess of terror. And then she eats them.

I...

Seeking Peer Reviews

6 months ago

1
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Sonia K (United States) published:

cracked peanut

PROMPT: Flash Fiction Competition 2020

I hate looking at peanut butter. I hate when Lisa smears a layer of the oozing, beige blood on her freshly sliced bread. I hate how she chews - her mouth chomping and vociferous.

Like she’s savoring murder. She finds joy in killing my people.

She finds joy in taking my friends, cracking them open with her French-manicured talons, and forcing them into her blender, until they are one big mess of terror. And then she eats them.

I stand...

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6 months ago

2

Sonia K (United States) published:

cracked peanut

PROMPT: Flash Fiction Competition 2020

I hate looking at peanut butter. I hate when Lisa smears a layer of the oozing, beige blood on her freshly sliced bread. I hate how she chews with such ferocity, her mouth opening and closing with vigorous excitement.

Like she’s savoring murder. She finds joy in killing my people.

She finds joy in taking my friends, cracking them open with her French-manicured talons, and forcing them into her blender, until they are one big mess of terror.

I stand...

Seeking Peer Reviews

6 months ago