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1) He hugged her goodbye.
2) He wrapped his arms around her, and she was enveloped by the smell of campfire smoke. She had noticed his eyes first. They were luminous and blue like the ocean glinting in the sunshine. She wondered if it bothered him that she was a whole foot shorter, a year older, and so quiet, never knowing what to say. She wondered most when she would see him again.
3) He caught her in his arms...
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