dav

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dav (Singapore) reviewed:

metamorphosis

FREE WRITING

Not sure if "flys" is intentional? As opposed to "flies"?
"Taunts your with goodbye" seems like maybe a typo?
Would "you'll grow to hate it to through" also happen to be a typo?

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dav (Singapore) published:

"what was the war like, mama?"

PROMPT: Flash Fiction Competition 2020

When the door gave? A judgement. Jagged and gaping. An ugly maw stretched wide. When the men came, they were wolves smiling. White wolves, with ice eyes. My brother spat, I remember this. Two sounds, like a clock turning. Defiance and death.

The crack of his neck rang my chest hollow. And when my mother screamed the world beneath kept crumbling away. They clawed her to the ground. There was little else after. 

Except fracturing, over and over. 

How many...

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about 1 year ago

dav (Singapore) published:

"what was the war like, mama?"

PROMPT: Flash Fiction Competition 2020

    When the door gave? A judgement. Jagged and gaping. An ugly maw stretched wide. When the men came, they were wolves smiling. White wolves, with ice eyes. My brother spat, I remember this. Two sounds, like a clock turning. Defiance and death.
    The crack of his neck rang my chest hollow. And when my mother screamed the world beneath kept crumbling away. They clawed her to the ground. There was little else after. 
    Except fracturing, over and over. 
    How many...

Seeking Peer Reviews

about 1 year ago