ILikeToWriteThings (United States) published:
FREE WRITING
The town of Alric knew neither peace nor war. There existed neither enemies nor allies behind those Earthen walls; time simply passed. Each morning was introduced by the commotion of awakening livestock, each night the setting of the sun. Nothing existed far outside the households of Alric commoners, and that was how they preferred it. The only thing more alien to them than the oceans was strife. Just as these lowly folks knew little of the world, the...
8 months ago
ILikeToWriteThings (United States) published:
FREE WRITING
The town of Alric knew neither peace nor war. There existed neither enemies nor allies behind those Earthen walls; time simply passed. Each morning was introduced by the commotion of awakening livestock, each night the setting of the sun. Nothing existed far outside the households of Alric commoners, and that was how they preferred it. The only thing more alien to them than the oceans was strife. Just as these lowly folks knew little of the world, the...
8 months ago
ILikeToWriteThings (United States) reviewed:
PROMPT: Flash Fiction Competition 2020
This piece is a bit vague in some areas (what do you mean when you say "he had her right where he wanted her?" why does he want this?) Also, some of the dialogue is a bit cliche. It's interesting...
8 months ago
ILikeToWriteThings (United States) published:
FREE WRITING
8 months ago
ILikeToWriteThings (United States) published:
PROMPT: Flash Fiction Competition 2020
I sat waiting for hours, just like yesterday, and the day before, consoled only by the heat of the hearth and the occasional kisses from Max. This had to be the day. I couldn’t explain to my mother the hopeful premonition I awoke with; any attempt was met with a tearful scolding. But my optimism depleted at the demise of daylight, so I began walking to bed. Then the door swung open. My eyes met his. I threw myself into...
8 months ago
ILikeToWriteThings (United States) reviewed:
PROMPT: Flash Fiction Competition 2020
Overall I really enjoyed this piece. My last critique is that I think the soldier's monologue ends slightly abruptly. He spends a lot of time describing what happened and then asks "how did it happen," but only very briefly. I...
8 months ago
ILikeToWriteThings (United States) published:
PROMPT: Flash Fiction Competition 2020
Far past the circle of heads in my peripheral lies the bright sky. I know these faces but cannot recall the persons behind them. “Do I know you?” My lips do not move. Why do they all cry?
The moon is out, and still I feel the light thump of tears beating upon my chest. Wait, where are they going now? Why is it suddenly black?
8 months ago
ILikeToWriteThings (United States) published:
PROMPT: Writing Streak Challenge -- Week 5
8 months ago
ILikeToWriteThings (United States) reviewed:
PROMPT: Flash Fiction Competition 2020
This is all my opinion, suggestions if anything; I'm not Hemingway, so if you disagree then ignore what I say.
8 months ago