FantasyOtter12

United States

He/him
ISFJ-T
Scorpio
Love dystopian fiction!
Pianist
Bookworm
Abnegation
*Est. 7/6/20*
OtterFAMMM
Phlegmatic-Sanguine

WtW's Resident Ghost Writer

Trying to meet more of this new community - come say hello! :D

Message from Writer

~Joined with best friends jztpenguin and mindfruit!!

~WtW adopted by ze amazing Anne Blackwood ^-^

~Son of Poseidon (Apparently. I guess it fits cuz...sea otters. Hm)

~ "A writer's job is to make the unclear clear and the clear unclear"
-mindfruit 2020

~Your imagination is the one place where nothing ever lies to you. -me

~Hey, you should go find an otter. I hear they're adorable!

~Caramel iced milk with boba, lychee jelly, and less ice please
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~Fav music genres -EDM-Lofi-Deep House-Ambient-Dubstep-

Peer Reviews

Spouting Midnight Nonsense v.

FREE WRITING

unknown

Hurricane Season

PROMPT: Novel Writing Competition 2020

If you have any questions about my feedback please ask!! Best of luck in the competition

7 months

My campaign speech to be the world's future president

PROMPT: Speechwriting Competition 2020

Good luck on the competition!!

8 months

Make A Change

PROMPT: Speechwriting Competition 2020

Best of luck in the competition, hope my review and comments help, feel free to ask questions if you have any!

8 months

The Gunpowder Plot

PROMPT: Historical Fiction Competition 2020

Good luck in the competition!

9 months

The Gunpowder Plot

PROMPT: Historical Fiction Competition 2020

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The Cold War in Me

PROMPT: Historical Fiction Competition 2020

Great job on this! Please don’t feel pressured to take my comments and I wish you best of luck in the competition!

9 months

And you don't look back.

FREE WRITING

Overall I would just say “you” less even though I get it’s the POV and all that XD Great work!!

9 months

Three Years

FREE WRITING

Just some little stuff that read weird to me. I really like this, it's sad and super moving <3

9 months

The Dandelion Queen

PROMPT: Historical Fiction Competition 2020

This is such a powerful story and I think you’ve thought of an amazing perspective to tell it from with Ruth. Good luck!

9 months

Longing

PROMPT: Flash Fiction Competition 2020

You have plenty more words so don't be afraid to add a bit more detail in your world building or description of the humans. You could add some suspense if you want, before the cub dies. Amazing piece! Keep going :D

10 months

Shaded Shadow

PROMPT: Flash Fiction Competition 2020

Great job with all the detail. Picturing this in my mind helps with the suspense and drama in this story. Keep going!! :D

10 months

Dear boy

PROMPT: Letter Writing Competition 2020

Like I said in the boxes before, I like this piece because of the reality combined with the metaphors of how you feel. Incredible job putting these kinds of feelings on the table!

11 months

bittersweet limited memories

FREE WRITING

Incredible writing! I'm totally new here but I can already tell you are such an influential writer here and now I see why!

11 months

Writing Streak: Week 1 Day 2

FREE WRITING

Super fun. Can't wait to see what you do next!

11 months

frets

FREE WRITING

Maybe, if you were focused on grammatical things, capitalize the first letter in a new sentence?

11 months

Writing Streak Week 1 Day 3

FREE WRITING

Interesting creativity in this list, really intriguing!

11 months

Challenge Completed

PROMPT: Writing Streak Challenge - Week 1

This inspired me to start doing the writing streak challenges. Thanks!

11 months

Camp Reflection

PROMPT: Camp Reflection

I agree with basically all of these things!

11 months

Down Eutopia Lane

PROMPT: Sci-Fi/Fantasy Story: Draft Two

Great story! I can't wait to hear the final draft!

11 months

Fighting for Life (Fantasy), 2nd draft

PROMPT: Sci-Fi/Fantasy Story: Draft Two

Good story and plot, and I love how she has to go through challenges to get through the door. If you want to continue on this story after camp, make it longer, I would love seeing how exactly in more detail she completes the first two challenges. Since this is flash fiction though, I think it is amazing.

11 months

Truthwatcher (first draft, fantasy)

PROMPT: Sci-Fi/Fantasy Story: Draft One

This is crazy good, I don't know what else I would add or take away! It is really cool that people on this level have connections with real gods, and everyone trains to be a soldier. One question I asked myself when reading this was what were all the soldiers in the kingdom fighting?

11 months

Travel Guide

PROMPT: Out of this World

I think this is great and can't wait to see how this turns out!

11 months

Planet Insight

PROMPT: Out of this World

This sounds like an amazing place! If the planet is small, it probably will have low gravity. What other things could be affected by this?

11 months

travel guide: water kills

PROMPT: Out of this World

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"You're... you're a human?"

PROMPT: Say What?!

Intriguing story, I loved it! I can really sense Cal's feelings as she is talking to Apollo, and I can't wait to see what this storyline evolves into!

11 months

Protagonist Profile: Novus

PROMPT: Protagonist Profile

Sounds great! Novus sounds unique, and I am excited to see how he deals with the problem of being an odd one out in this story. What happens if he does not live up to his family's expectation? What do they think of him?

11 months