rchsoccer

United States

Just a guy with some words in his brain. Never really tried anything like this, but I wanted to get out of my comfort zone.
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I love reading, especially Percy Jackson.
I like Avatar: The Last Airbender and The Legend of Korra.
I am a Senior who really doesn't know what is going on.

rchsoccer (United States) reviewed:

skylarks over sunrays

PROMPT: Novel Writing Competition 2020

I left a couple comments, and I promise I'm not trying to be mean or harsh, the writing was just very good so I had to be pretty nit-picky to find "issues" within your writing. (there really weren't any issues...

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rchsoccer (United States) liked skylarks over sunrays by rosemarywisdom (Singapore)

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rchsoccer (United States) liked That was then by Hazel Nut (Australia)

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rchsoccer (United States) published:

I Wish

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I wish I didn't take things for granted:
my family
my friends
my money
my car
my life

I wish I cared more:
about people
about school
about relationships
about normal teenage things

I wish I was better:
at sports
at school
at motivating myself
at being vulnerable



But in the end, I guess that there really isn't much I can do to help face the demons.

15 days ago

rchsoccer (United States) published:

Burnt Out

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No matter what I give, I give my all
In return, I get asked for more.

I do as much as I can,
But I am burnt out,
Nothing left to give.

Once, I felt great,
I'd push myself to learn and think and strive to be better

But now I think back on it,
Wishing I had saved the effort for when it really mattered.

And now I have nothing left to give.

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15 days ago

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rchsoccer (United States) published:

Alone

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    John was scared, he had nowhere else to turn, he was utterly and completely alone. His memories came to him in flashes, a name, a year, a day, but nothing stuck. All he knew for certain was his name, John. He couldn't forget that, it was everything he had. He was stripped of everything, all his memories and friends (he assumed he had had friends), loved ones. Nothing would come back to him, hard as he tried to remember. His...

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about 2 months ago

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rchsoccer (United States) published:

2035

PROMPT: Cli-Fi

In 2035, no one ever knew what to expect. The world seemed to get worse every day, dying of agony due to the stress we put it under. There are no fish in the ocean, no birds in the sky. Fresh air is a commodity long since forgotten. Fires rage hellbent on wreaking havoc on the sinners of mankind. Hurricanes strike towns along coastlines, threatening their massive fists in an attempt to wipe us out for good. There are few...

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about 2 months ago

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