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Maria Sorrentino's thoughts

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15

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I came into this piece looking for nothing and I am blown away. I leave this page with happiness and understanding.

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Maria Sorrentino's thoughts (United States) published:

past

PROMPT: Historical Fiction Competition 2016

    I wake up shivering more than I ever have before. I missed my home,I missed my family, I missed... everything. I was stuck on this horrid boat. Everyone talks about how this will be a huge part of our history, but not one of these people even thought about how things would be if something went wrong. I wan't to warn them, I wan't to warn them about how time will change and most won't even know their names. How...

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Maria Sorrentino's thoughts (United States) published:

past

PROMPT: Historical Fiction Competition 2016

    I wake up shivering more than I ever have before. I missed my home,I missed my family, I missed... everything. I was stuck on this horrid boat. Everyone talks about how this will be a huge part of our history, but not one of these people even thought about how things would be if something went wrong. I wan't to warn them, I wan't to warn them about how time will change and most won't even know their names. How...

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Maria Sorrentino's thoughts (United States) published:

fourteen years

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fourteen years of trying to make sense 
fourteen years of making a mess 
fourteen years of hanging about 
fourteen years of figuring things out 
fourteen years of hearing songs 
fourteen years of playing along 
fourteen years of fearful noise 
fourteen years of crowded joy 

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Maria Sorrentino's thoughts (United States) published:

fourteen years

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fourteen years of trying to make sense 
fourteen years of making a mess 
fourteen years of hanging about 
fourteen years of figuring things out 
fourteen years of hearing songs 
fourteen years of playing along 
fourteen years of fearful noise 
fourteen years of crowded joy 

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Maria Sorrentino's thoughts (United States) reviewed:

Accidents

PROMPT: Quartet

This was so good. It caught my attention and then I was sucked in. This literally made my eyes water. Continue writing!

over 2 years ago

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Maria Sorrentino's thoughts (United States) published:

The Forgotten Time

PROMPT: Time Traveler

While I sit on the swing-set I see many things
all too beautiful to write
back when people didn't have a known fight 
they sat and wondered about intoxicating tomorrow's instead of cruel today's
 

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Maria Sorrentino's thoughts (United States) published:

The Forgotten Time

PROMPT: Time Traveler

While I sit on the swing-set I see many things
all too beautiful to write
back when people didn't have a known fight 
they sat and wondered about intoxicating tomorrow's instead of cruel today's
 

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Maria Sorrentino's thoughts (United States) published:

The Questions

PROMPT: Flashlight

We get home
is anyone home
we get to school 
did I pass the test
We go on vacation
do I have to go
we get on a plane 
can I get home now 
we age 
why did I question instead of living 

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