seaomelette

United Arab Emirates

Heyo! I’m Lauren, a high school sophomore who loves reading too many fantasy novel series, listening to music, and eating a probably unhealthy amount of ice cream.

Message from Writer

I love helping other writers! Just comment a piece you'd like to be reviewed on and I'll reply shortly. (*^▽^*)

Peer Reviews

Dear Covid-19

PROMPT: Creative Nonfiction Competition 2020

I loved reading your personal narrative, and your message was so uplifting. Good luck with the competition, and wishing you all the best with your writing endeavors! If you have any questions, feel free to reach out to me, and I'll be happy to help! :D

about 7 hours

The Blank Page

FREE WRITING

I absolutely loved this poem - its concept was so creative, and your writing was captivating. Keep up the amazing writing, and if you have any questions, feel free to reach out to me. :D

3 days

The Witch Doctor's Children

PROMPT: Novel Writing Competition 2020

This novel excerpt was superbly written, and I loved your descriptions! If you have any questions, feel free to reach out to me and I'll be happy to help. :D

6 days

Ruthless - Excerpt

PROMPT: Novel Writing Competition 2020

If you have any questions, just reach out to me, and I'll be happy to help! <3

8 days

A King's Crown

PROMPT: Novel Writing Competition 2020

This novel excerpt was marvelous, and I had an awesome time reading and reviewing it. Keep up the epic writing, and if you have any questions, just ask, and I'll be happy to help! :3

11 days

Survive Just Survive

PROMPT: Novel Writing Competition 2020

Keep up the awesome writing! I'm excited to read more from you!! If you ever have any questions, just reach out to me, and I'll be happy to help. :D

11 days

Carol

PROMPT: Novel Writing Competition 2020

I hope this review was helpful, and if you have any questions, just ask me. I'll be happy to answer them! Best of luck in the competition!!

17 days

Beyond My Fence (Draft 2)

FREE WRITING

Keep up the amazing writing! I'd love to read more poetry and short stories from you. If you have any questions, just ask me, I'll be happy to help. :3

17 days

One day in my life.

PROMPT: Novel Writing Competition 2020

Reviewing this piece, I'm 100% rooting for you. Keep writing, soldier! You've got this.

21 days

Final Breath

PROMPT: Cli-Fi

Keep writing! I think it's awesome that you enjoyed writing this piece, even if it's not something you'd usually write. That's the fun of writing! I'd love to read more from you, and if you choose to revise this piece again, I'm down to re-read it! If you have any questions, feel free to reach out to me in the Comments section below. I'll be happy to help!

26 days

Alluring Anime: What about Anime makes me Lose all Sense of Time?

FREE WRITING

Keep up the fantastic writing! I'd love to read this piece again if you choose to revise it, and as always, feel free to ask any questions. I'll be happy to answer them! (ノ◕ヮ◕)ノ*:・゚✧

27 days

The Virus is Spreading

PROMPT: Cli-Fi

Keep writing! I'd love to read this piece again if you choose to revise it. I notice that this is your first piece on WTW, so welcome! I hope you have an awesome time here, and I'm excited to read more from you!! Don't hesitate to reach out if you have any questions. I'm here to answer them. :)

29 days

I Am Alone (My Attempt at a Halloween story)

FREE WRITING

Keep up the fantastic writing! I found this story super interesting, and I absolutely loved the concept. If you do choose to revise this piece again, I'm down to re-read it. <3

about 1 month

A Shortened Beginning

FREE WRITING

I hope I was able to help, and I can't wait to read the next installment, or this piece again if you choose to revise it. Keep up the fantastic writing!! (ノ◕ヮ◕)ノ*:・゚✧

about 1 month

Silver and the King

FREE WRITING

Keep up the awesome writing! I'd love to read this piece again if you choose to revise it, and I'd really love to read a piece on Silver's background. :D

about 1 month

Void Apocalypse, Chapter One

FREE WRITING

Keep up the great writing! I'd love to read more from you, and I can't wait to read the next chapter of "Void Apocalypse"!

about 1 month

I'll Never See You Again

FREE WRITING

Keep up the awesome writing! I'd love to read this piece again if you choose to revise it. (ノ◕ヮ◕)ノ*:・゚✧

about 1 month

"Wait."

PROMPT: All Talk

Keep up the awesome writing! ^-^

about 1 month

romeo, romeo, wherefore didst thou go?

FREE WRITING

Keep up the amazing writing! I don't normally review poetry, but this poem was so fantastic I just had to tell you how much i loved it!! (ノ◕ヮ◕)ノ*:・゚✧

about 2 months

A Sea of Blackness

PROMPT: Cli-Fi

Keep up the amazing writing! And I wish you all the best with your surfing endeavors :D

about 2 months

When Existence Ceases, Only Memories Survive

FREE WRITING

Keep up the awesome writing! I'd love to see more 99-word stories from you. ^-^

about 2 months

Abandoned

FREE WRITING

I really loved this story, and I'm excited to read more from you! Keep up the awesome writing. :D

about 2 months

Warmth of Fairies' Magic

FREE WRITING

From what I've gathered, Ellie and Henry live in a castle in this fantastical, magical world. I'd love to read more about them! Keep up the awesome work! ^-^

about 2 months

Run

PROMPT: Flash Fiction Competition 2020

4 months

The Witch and The Mouse | Prologue (Title ideas and feedback needed)

FREE WRITING

I really enjoyed reading this piece! I'm not the best at titles, but I think "The Witch and the Mouse", though generic, keeps up the nice fairytale vibe you have going throughout the story. If not, maybe consider the overall plot of the story to come and pick out a great, catchy title from there. An example would be Phillip Pullman's series His Dark Materials. The first book of the series is called Northern Lights, cos those play a huge, magical role in the book, and it sounds really nice. Just remember that it's alright if you can't think up a title immediately. In conclusion, keep up the awesome writing, and I wish you all the best with your projects. :3

5 months

Sand or Rock

FREE WRITING

Keep up the great work! :3

5 months

#astoryfullstop, Prologue

FREE WRITING

Keep up the amazing work! I can't wait to read more!!

5 months

Telegram

FREE WRITING

Overall, this was an awesome play, and I really enjoyed reading it. Keep up the great writing!

5 months

vignettes of a drive-in cinema

FREE WRITING

Keep it up! I really enjoyed reading your writing!

5 months

Friends Forever

PROMPT: Photo Prompt

I really liked your descriptions of the characters! Even though the story was short, I was able to get a glimpse of Courtney and Verónica's personalities (i.e. Courtney being a habitually late person).

5 months