Huba Huba

United States

Writer, poet, musician, wanna-be-botanist.
Sleep deprived.
Call me a monster, I put milk in before the cereal.
I'm probably eating ramen right now or having a mental breakdown.
Imagine having an aesthetic bio
Joined: May 26, 2020

Message from Writer

Please read my work and tell me about your opinions.
I'd love to make some writing friends on this platform, let's help each other!
PHEwwww that sounded cheesy, but I meant it.

Peer Reviews

The Girl Who Never Forgot

PROMPT: Novel Writing Competition 2020

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Nothing Happens in Small Towns

PROMPT: Novel Writing Competition 2020

Sorry for the late review, I've been a little busy lately!

9 months

Searching Within the Fog for Someone

PROMPT: Novel Writing Competition 2020

I apologize for getting back to your request a little late, I've been rather busy during the past few days. Good luck on the competition, and feel free to reach out to me! Your friend, Huba huba (haha yup, a strange username)

9 months

I See The Future

PROMPT: The Unseen

Keep up your work, keep on writing. Good job on this one! Don't be discouraged from my many points of possible improvement, I simply believe that for writers to improve, it's better for them to receive more criticism than compliments, and I do what I want others to do for me.

11 months

Seed's That Never Grew

PROMPT: Flash Fiction Competition 2020

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Shaded Shadow

PROMPT: Flash Fiction Competition 2020

Don't be afraid to edit this and re-publish this so many times! It shows that you're improving your writing, and keep up the good work! I'll try my best to see all your versions!

12 months

Hope Beyond the Clouds

PROMPT: Flash Fiction Competition 2020

12 months

Going Home

PROMPT: Flash Fiction Competition 2020

I think that it would be interesting if you added in more of what the protagonist felt like when he/she got mistaken so many times. If I were in the protagonist's place, I'd be pretty upset with how the Grandma only thinks of all these other people, and doesn't value my presence.

12 months

A Broken Summer Rhythm | FINAL

PROMPT: Flash Fiction Competition 2020

Also, if you find it difficult to omit your seasonal descriptions, you could try starting with omitting the first two sentences. Perhaps something like, "we only meet every summer, otherwise we're apart." Remember, there doesn't need to be so many specifications!

12 months

On The Wings Of Hundreds

PROMPT: Flash Fiction Competition 2020

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Aerial Gravity #IAmContest

FREE WRITING

about 1 year

siblings?

FREE WRITING

about 1 year