Busssy.Beee

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*Joined 5/21/20*

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Because of Hatred (SomethingUnique5)

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He took her hand, smiling from ear to ear. She looked at him, grinning. This was their first trip together as husband and wife. The doors open and they took their first-ever step outside. The bridesmaids and groomsmen stood outside the door clapping and laughing, everyone having a good time. No one knew that the next few minutes would lead to a tragedy, not even the one planning for the car crash. The newlyweds stepped into the car, waving at...

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Dear Mama (please review)

PROMPT: Letter Writing Competition 2020

All of my comments are really suggestions, but I hope you take them into consideration.

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Saving Tea Parties

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I lay the teacups in front of me
five porcelain teacups and one teapot
I take my lavender and drop them into the teapot
I stir, careful not to spill
Sit straighter. I think to myself. 
Grandmother stares at me making sure I do everything right
I continue the Chinese tea ceremony
Sitting on my knees and pouring 
Five perfect cups of tea
"Hen Hao," Grandmother congratulates me. 
"Xie Xie," I say, thanking her. 
We sip our lavender tea ...

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A Story Before The American Revolution (#mysecondcontest3)

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"Chancellor, could you please do some errands for me, dear," Mother asked, "Your sisters are going to stay home, and I have to watch them."
"Of course, mother. What errands do you need to do?" I responded.
"Could you please get some food from my grandmother? She has prepared some stew for us tonight. After, could you go to your father's and please bring his black suit? He left it in his wardrobe this morning" Mother said, "Thank you, Chancellor." ...

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Life with YELLOW

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Yellow
it can mean so much 
from bright yellow sunshine
to danger and warnings
a world full of yellow 
has meanings of all sorts

Joy
emojis
sunflowers 
canaries
all representing delight

Illness
Jaundice
Bladder cancer
Liver disease 
all representing sickness

Nature
Ambers
Bumblebees
Daffodils
All representing life

Food
Bananas
Pineapples
Macaroni and cheese
All representing nourishment

Entertainment
Winnie the Pooh
Minions
Spongebob
All representing play

In a world full of yellow
what would we be missing
we will have everything ...

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