PROMPT: Historical Fiction Competition 2020
The ending seems a little abrupt. Maybe add a section to tie things together and the closing (i.e. your loving mother) to wrap it up. Otherwise, great job and good luck! I'm hoping to start on mine soon hehe :)
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Hey! Me again <3 I love your pieces and I think you're a really good writer
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This piece really hit home because riding in elevators is one of my BIGGEST fears. Just thinking about having to be in this woman's position scared the heebies out of me. I love the chill and thrill aspect though, it's one of my favorite types of pieces to read and I definitely got a satisfying scare from this one!
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