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Start of my story

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Present Day, 1943.
My eyes stare blankly at the wilting flower.  My notebook lay in between my knees.  This notebook is one of the most important things in my life.  It was red, with a bit of the color fading on the edges.  If this was ever in the hands of someone else, it could be very dangerous.  When I first started writing in it, I promised to keep it to myself, and to never let someone get even a...

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Hamilton (United States) published:

Start of my story

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Present Day, 1943.
My eyes stare blankly at the wilting flower.  My notebook lay in between my knees.  This notebook is one of the most important things in my life.  It was red, with a bit of the color fading on the edges.  If this was ever in the hands of someone else, it could be very dangerous.  When I first started writing in it, I promised to keep it to myself, and to never let someone get even a...

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Hamilton (United States) published:

Beginning to my Story

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    Lunch is the same everyday.  I walk past the snaking hot-lunch line, and past our towering school sculpture, made from plastic bottles.  There are tables after tables lined next to each other, except one, farther to the left from most other tables.  The ‘popular’ table.  Of course there are few people sitting there, some only last there a day, and get pushed out, I still think that is a privilege.  I have never even touched that table.  I don’t need...

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12 months ago

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Hamilton (United States) published:

Goodbye.

PROMPT: Five Line Fiction

My little sister is brought to the hospital.  The doctor approaches my mom, and they walk behind a curtain to talk, but I can still hear what he says.  She has leukemia.  There is swelling in her lymph nodes, and there is a shortness of red blood cells throughout her body.  That same night she was just sleeping in her bed, now one year later she lay silently on the hospital bed. 

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Hamilton (United States) published:

Start of My Novel

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Chapter One (1943) 
I watch from the back window into the neighbor’s yard.  Our fence is as tall as me, but I stand on a stump of a tree that had fallen down in a snow storm last year.  I step off the stump, and I drop to the ground, still wet from last night’s rain.  I knock the side of the wood, and it lets out a dull thud.  I stick my finger through the top of the stump...

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Hamilton (United States) published:

Never Sneak Chocolate At Night

PROMPT: Playwriting Competition 2020

Scene 1 (Orthodontists Office)
Kylie walks out of door
Keira:  Braces off!
Kylie opens her mouth, and Keira cringes.
Keira:  What did they do to your mouth!?
Kylie starts to cry, and they go out of the office.
Mom:  Keira, get in the car.  Now.
Keira:  Sorry... it was just natural instincts to cringe when I see something like...
Keira points to Kylie.
"Like that."

Scene 2 (Home)
Keira walks into her bedroom after a long car ride of screaming...

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