Looking at the piece in its totality, the writer's vivid imagery and strong diction combine to convey the idea of a child's curiosity. But should the writer choose the revise, I feel that the he/she should incorporate that quality of...

Overall, the writer's transition in tone as well as the climactic conclusion with the simple dropping of the match combine to display the author's writing prowess. For a future draft, I'd simply recommend that the author just incorporate more natural...

Ultimately, I love the piece in that the writer is able to convey a love story in just a few sentences. As I stated in the last comment, there are some opportunities for further description, but overall, the writer does...

In retrospect, the writer takes advantage of a difficult prompt to craft a joyous, familial narrative. He/she especially does well with the incorporation of dialogue as it feels sincere and lures the reader into the setting. Should the writer choose...

Overall, the piece's melancholy tone and sincere, personalized diction such as the "small is what i get called" enable the reader to sympathize with the speaker. Should the writer choose to revise, I'd simply recommend that he/she incorporate a little...

Overall, the writer does a nice job at conveying this narrative through his/her brief, successive sentences and blithe tone. Should the writer choose to revise, I think that he/she should elaborate upon the identities of the people in the narrative...

Overall, the writer's eerie tone and his/her ability to craft such a mysterious context around the piece makes it appealing in its brevity. Furthermore, I love how even though the author cut down on the length of the piece, he...

Overall, the writer does a superb job at bringing the reader into the piece immediately with his/her first line. The concept of the speaker also traveling through, what I perceived as, her mind and memories is very unique and something...

Looking at the piece in its entirety, the writer does a superb job at developing a narrative through poignant description as well as inserting two of the words prescribed in the prompt. The writer does so with such fluidity that...

Overall, the writer's incorporation of dialogue and his/her ability to take advantage of a difficult prompt combine to cultivate an interesting and in depth narrative. The only changes that I'd recommend would be to elaborate upon the moment of the...