18ggill

United States

18ggill (United States) reviewed:

Fascination

PROMPT: Writing Small

Looking at the piece in its totality, the writer's vivid imagery and strong diction combine to convey the idea of a child's curiosity. But should the writer choose the revise, I feel that the he/she should incorporate that quality of...

over 3 years ago

18ggill (United States) reviewed:

Fight

PROMPT: Writing Small

Overall, the writer's transition in tone as well as the climactic conclusion with the simple dropping of the match combine to display the author's writing prowess. For a future draft, I'd simply recommend that the author just incorporate more natural...

over 3 years ago

18ggill (United States) reviewed:

Temporary

PROMPT: Writing Small

Ultimately, I love the piece in that the writer is able to convey a love story in just a few sentences. As I stated in the last comment, there are some opportunities for further description, but overall, the writer does...

over 3 years ago

18ggill (United States) reviewed:

Lighting Stories

PROMPT: Writing Small

In retrospect, the writer takes advantage of a difficult prompt to craft a joyous, familial narrative. He/she especially does well with the incorporation of dialogue as it feels sincere and lures the reader into the setting. Should the writer choose...

over 3 years ago

18ggill (United States) reviewed:

Small

PROMPT: Writing Small

Overall, the piece's melancholy tone and sincere, personalized diction such as the "small is what i get called" enable the reader to sympathize with the speaker. Should the writer choose to revise, I'd simply recommend that he/she incorporate a little...

over 3 years ago

18ggill (United States) reviewed:

Matchstick

PROMPT: Writing Small

Overall, the writer does a nice job at conveying this narrative through his/her brief, successive sentences and blithe tone. Should the writer choose to revise, I think that he/she should elaborate upon the identities of the people in the narrative...

over 3 years ago

18ggill (United States) reviewed:

Trapped

PROMPT: Writing Small

Overall, the writer's eerie tone and his/her ability to craft such a mysterious context around the piece makes it appealing in its brevity. Furthermore, I love how even though the author cut down on the length of the piece, he...

over 3 years ago

18ggill (United States) reviewed:

Memories

PROMPT: Writing Small

Overall, the writer does a superb job at bringing the reader into the piece immediately with his/her first line. The concept of the speaker also traveling through, what I perceived as, her mind and memories is very unique and something...

over 3 years ago

18ggill (United States) reviewed:

Melancholy Atmosphere

PROMPT: Writing Small

Looking at the piece in its entirety, the writer does a superb job at developing a narrative through poignant description as well as inserting two of the words prescribed in the prompt. The writer does so with such fluidity that...

over 3 years ago

18ggill (United States) reviewed:

The Last Birthday

PROMPT: Writing Small

Overall, the writer's incorporation of dialogue and his/her ability to take advantage of a difficult prompt combine to cultivate an interesting and in depth narrative. The only changes that I'd recommend would be to elaborate upon the moment of the...

over 3 years ago