Remaking_The_World

United States

she/her
INFJ
Ravenpuff ~ Abnegation
Dancer ~ Artist
Musician (oboe, piano, ukulele)
Over-thinker ~ Weirdo ~ Bookworm
Liberal ~ No Planet B
~Joined March 2020~

Message from Writer

My username is from one of my favorite book quotes: "Quick, make a wish. Take a (second or third or fourth) chance. Remake the world." Jandy Nelson, I'll Give You The Sun

Currently Reading:
The Adventures of Tom Sawyer
The Diary of Anne Frank
The Ballad of Songbirds and Snakes

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~Any feedback appreciated~

Remaking_The_World (United States) published:

How to Remake the World

PROMPT: Poetry and Spoken Word Competition: 2021

i. 
crumbling, broken pieces
(of me
         us
            our world)

the colors are fading
the coats of paint peeling
pieces falling apart

a ceramic figure full of cracks, glue
a taped-together almost-masterpiece

                                                                                           ...

Seeking Peer Reviews

26 days ago

Remaking_The_World (United States) published:

How to Remake the World

PROMPT: Poetry and Spoken Word Competition: 2021

i. 
crumbling, broken pieces
(of me
         us
            our world)

the colors are fading
the coats of paint peeling
pieces falling apart

a ceramic figure full of cracks, glue
a taped-together almost-masterpiece

                                                                                                                     (our world is broken)
ii.
stringing together bits and pieces
puzzle pieces to the right places

sparking fingers; adding life
cleansing breath; removing death

deciding what lives and what dies
what it means to be alive
               ...

Seeking Peer Reviews

26 days ago

Remaking_The_World (United States) published:

How to Remake the World

PROMPT: Poetry and Spoken Word Competition: 2021

i. 
crumbling, broken pieces
(of me
         us
            our world)

the colors are fading
the coats of paint peeling
pieces falling apart

a ceramic figure full of cracks, glue
a taped-together almost-masterpiece

ii.
stringing together bits and pieces
puzzle pieces to the right places

sparking fingers; adding life
cleansing breath; removing death

deciding what lives and what dies
what it means to be alive
                          be...

Seeking Peer Reviews

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